Pitiful
By 101darkraven
Th-...This anger that i feel
shouldn't be mine.
This Godforesaken anger that i hold within my conscious
is begging to be seen but i
won't show it to Mankind.
For man is the serpent.
You disrespect me but yet you thank me.
You dismean me and then you praise me.
......
Make up your Mind.
You've taken my pyschology
and placeed yours within me.
Now i'm searching for myself in this
graveyard of the lost.
I never thought looking for myself would be this difficult.
You've taken away my dignity
just like a person has taken away
a sadden child away from their mother's arms.
I'm surrounded by wickedness..
but i refuse to be swallowed by it.
My options are fading away.
I will no longer serve the pitiful.
And never submit to false defeat.
But i'll stand upon my two feet and tell myself
.... ÏŒταν θα Îχει νÏŒημα η ζωή?
Author's Note:
the last part is in Greek so go on google translate.Comments on "Pitiful "
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On Tuesday, May 10, 2016, 101darkraven
(56) wrote:
Thanks so much
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A former member wrote:
Η ζωή Îχει νόημα μόνο όταν εμείς της δίνουμε αξία...
It's a nice poem with good usage of words. Well done!
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On Saturday, February 6, 2016, 101darkraven
(56) wrote:
thank you I really do appreciate it. :)
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A former member wrote:
That last stanza was absolutely mind blowing so poetic, its dim yet so beautiful great work there absolutely loved it
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On Tuesday, December 15, 2015, 101darkraven
(56) wrote:
Yep very true
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On Monday, December 14, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
"'m surrounded by wickedness.. but i refuse to be swallowed by it. My options are fading away. I will no longer serve the pitiful." - yup, you can't swallow what they are trying to feed you...that is the only defense sometimes. Ciao, T/S