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- "I can't say that I understood most of this poem.. I get the gist of it (I think) from your tags. BUT I thoroughly enjoyed reading every unpredictable word of it. Very interesting writing"
Posted by Cantara on "Untitled (5-1-15)" by Jessica Orr
- "@Ortolan...Well, thanks as you are really making me feel good. So nice of you. Yes, it's raw, it's truly my view and it's the ability to forget and transfer to a neutral medium all of these meandering things (words or garbage or what's inside me). It's weird and I can't explain, I guess. But it's part therapy for me too. So, again, thanks and maybe one day both of us will do that "turning to stone" thing we spoke about (if only!) Later"
Posted by Jessica Orr on "I said magic" by Jessica Orr
- "@Ortolan...Good reasoning as it is related to powers of the earthly-kind, namely individuals devoted to a worship of self, lust and spreading malaise through religion in bizarro-world. I don't think a higher power, whether alien or god intended some freked up things these people do. Again, Thanks for reading and I really appreciate your feedback as you are an awesome writer. "
Posted by Jessica Orr on "They cross" by Jessica Orr
- "@Ortolan...I have a weird search for why sin exists and I think beautiful and cursed Eve is just a front for that propinquity of error and the horror of fucking things up- and thank you as you are very kind with your analysis."
Posted by Jessica Orr on "The reasons of my smile- PART I" by Jessica Orr
- "@Damien...I like your works- you understand the reaching to light like me. Your "The House on the Hill" rocks. I think we would both take that chance of turning to stone as perhaps that means finding the meaning of it all. That make sense? Anyway, later and thanks for reading my poem"
Posted by Jessica Orr on "Almost perfect" by Jessica Orr
- "We are always in search of perfection and that is what motivates. I fear what would happen if we came face to face with it? Turn to stone perhaps. Nice write"
Posted by Damien on "Almost perfect" by Jessica Orr
- "Very interesting work.Your ability to write about sensitive subjects with eloquence is no simple or common task."
Posted by Ortolan on "I said magic" by Jessica Orr
- "That's another amazing poem. I kept thinking about crop circles and nazca lines, but I don't know if that was what was intended."
Posted by Ortolan on "They cross" by Jessica Orr
- "@VSoul...Think Macbeth- always a spot, "Out damn spot". Always the possibility nothing can resurrect what was before. "
Posted by Jessica Orr on "Bleach" by Jessica Orr
- "This is written in blood from your bones, it comes from the deep space in you. Most only care to write surface level but, you keep blasting the status quot to smithereens. You have a talent that vexes me, truly."
Posted by Phalanx on "Remembering infinity" by Jessica Orr
- "Wow. This is a whole lot of...something that I'm gonna need to read several times. Partly because I need more time to try and decipher it, and partly because I really enjoyed it. Awesome pen!"
Posted by Unknown on "Of hands" by Jessica Orr
- "@Damien...It's as if the world compacts into a shiny point and then it is made into poetry. I guess my stuff is story-like. Thank you for the feedback and for reading it."
Posted by Jessica Orr on "I said magic" by Jessica Orr
- "Unattainable heights
require affordable
inquires
and
the right shoes.
Once a member,
peeling it is
just not done.
Shower, work
then a poem for you.
You are interesting."
Posted by Jessica Orr on "Untitled" by Jessica Orr
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