Comments by All Members
- "The stops and starts I got from listening to one of the Interstellar soundtracks that has a clock ticking in the background of the whole song. Essentially was experimenting to get the same result without overtly rhyming the poem or using standard syllable structures. Glad the effect was realized. Thank you Nat"
Posted by Shikiryu on "Entropy" by Shikiryu
- "I liked this alot...the stops and starts lend a subtle air to the flow..nicely done!"
Posted by natalie on "Entropy" by Shikiryu
- "I agree with Lupus, Specter, and others... It is a thought provoker, ...but think about it...how do you feel about your family? Remember, there are different types of love...and in all things there is an opposite."
Posted by natalie on "Love is Non-Exisistent" by Shikiryu
- "Another winner! You are a truth and knowledge seeker...and a rare soul...your writing reveals a gentleness and understanding of things beyond your years. Keep writing! Much enjoyed."
Posted by natalie on "​Millennial Agony" by Shikiryu
- "I agree with Nimue44..and I believe even the darkest soul has a sliver of light somewhere inside. Wonderful write!"
Posted by natalie on "Inner Truth" by Shikiryu
- "I do enjoy the flow as well. You developed a nice meter and continued along, as in a deep conversation telling a splendid story. Nice work."
Posted by Sudos on "Entropy" by Shikiryu
- "My previous reply was kind of callaous. What I mean is that I'm kinda alone in this world. Sure people might like me and stuff but I bear all my hardships and pain by myself. If I decide the burden is too much one day, I don't think there's anyone alive who has the right to tell me not to end it or not. Not saying I'm gonna off myself but if i make that choice, it's mine"
Posted by Shikiryu on ""Death might not be so bad"" by Shikiryu
- "If you are wishing upon death do me a favor and make sure you arent in love, because burring a significant other is the absolute worst pain I have experienced and I still feel it EVERY day almost 2 years later ~*Cat*~"
Posted by Cattarax on ""Death might not be so bad"" by Shikiryu
- "Definitely enjoyed the level of comfort in your morbidity and the smooth way you portray it. This also puts me in mind of a quote I fell in love with as a young lad. “Why should I fear death?
If I am, then death is not.
If Death is, then I am not.
Why should I fear that which can only exist when I do not?
Long time men lay oppressed with slavish fear.
Religious tyranny did domineer.
At length the mighty one of Greece
Began to assent the liberty of man.†- Epicurus"
Posted by Sudos on ""Death might not be so bad"" by Shikiryu
- "Very cool piece! I concur with the other's comments. I love your word choices...nature is freaking fantastic!"
Posted by natalie on "D5// Magic I See" by Shikiryu
- "Reading the KJV bible as a kid paid off ha, thanks for the kind words."
Posted by Shikiryu on "Entropy" by Shikiryu
- "I really enjoy your style. A lot of reflection, you handle it with so much eloquence. Well done."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Entropy" by Shikiryu
- "Glad you enjoyed it. What do you think about the flow if you dont mind me asking. I normally use full sentences but i decided to see how this would turn out if it was read with the single line pauses for emphasis
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Posted by Shikiryu on "Entropy" by Shikiryu
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