D5// Magic I See

By Shikiryu

I like the birds and bees,
rivers,
trees,
I like sunshine
on the blue seas.

Show me nature in it's prime
Utter complexity
You say "Divine".
Tragic.
True wonders are far more sublime.

Look within to see the true magic
Conscious we are,
Dive beneath the Epipelagic.
For from the abyss arises horror,
Sarcophagic.

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Copyright 2019 Shikiryu
Published on Monday, July 29, 2019.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"

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  • Dilated View On Tuesday, July 30, 2019, Dilated View (583)By person wrote:

    Interesting concept with the dual outer then inner landscapes, and the concept of experiencing duality with both. I'm drawn to the moon and stars, but the moon especially. I'm also drawn to the lakes, the rivers and the seas. Both outwardly and internally. Very cool piece, Nicely done :)

  • Shikiryu On Friday, August 2, 2019, Shikiryu (70)By person wrote:

    Thank you, I think duality is something that metre and rhyme is basically built to express. Like the sun and moon, moon and stars duality is all around. Do you have anything written with the moon as focus? I'd def give it a read

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