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- "I related to this wholly and in a completely different way.... a ghost I chase after, longing for
Self. The dream I want to make reality. Existence. You described my plight with perfection without intention. "
Posted by Cantara on "The Apparition of Pleasure" by Flying indigo express
- "There are a body of survivors who , once they make it this far , have the resilience and knowledge to make it all the way , lifting their familiars with them ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "An excerpt from " by Flying indigo express
- ""The only world I've ever known sleeps beneath the waves." I've always loved that quote. Your work reminded me of it, as a dream that I almost remembered, a dream that I had in the tip of my tongue, but somehow... Faded away."
Posted by Nimue44 on "The Apparition of Pleasure" by Flying indigo express
- "The title drew me in because I have a thing about eons, especially when it comes to music and this was as musical and vibrant as it was chanting and foreboding. Humans forget the natural cycle and flow of the universe so easily and this beautiful verse is a great reminder to help pull us back into the great order of things. I only wish it were longer as I could have basked in that flow endlessly."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Yet Another Eon Cycle" by Flying indigo express
- "Lol, I find out I'm MVP from a note you left me, learn I've been bookmarked by a note you left me...Please inform me should I pass in the night, less I roam around confused avoiding the light."
Posted by Flying indigo express on "Chrysalis" by Flying indigo express
- "You mean *Neil Gaiman, but no matter, that man's a genius. This took me back to when I was a lad, when I loved to explore deep ponds on the countryside, pretending them to be gateways to other worlds, imagining all manner of beast & leviathan to hinder my aquatic quest for escape. The reality at the bottom was always algae & mud, but ya can't fault a boy for tryin', eh? You've also created a nice metaphor here for not judging based upon appearances. Good stuff all around."
Posted by Unknown on "This Deceptively Deep Pond" by Flying indigo express
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