Comments by All Members
- "'joining me where i usually wind up: on the bathroom floor'. I have been ther many times. I can realy relate to this poem. I am there for everyone, and they seek me out. But who visited me in the hospital? Noone... Great write, than you."
Posted by leluna on "The Bathroom Floor" by lordshadow
- "Amen to this.........i couldn't agree more........i think it's amazing how clean and blood free the hands 'appear' to be around the world these days"
Posted by elisa on "The Right to Remain Silent" by lordshadow
- "Well damn. This was something I can relate to so completely that I'm not even sure what to say. "Keep fighting the good fight" would be a bit cliche considering the circumstances but... that's what we tell ourselves anyway. Smooth fucking write. ~Ship!
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Posted by Unknown on "The Bathroom Floor" by lordshadow
- "I know...so well...or at least i feel i know exactly what your saying and this brought tears to my eyes...and i felt it so deeply...you are a true poet...and i envy you beyond reason..."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "The Bathroom Floor" by lordshadow
- "i could see someone so clear in my mind as i read, screaming at the mirror and finally crumbling to the floor...i seem to have the same problem..my compassion is my weakness...if ever you need an ear to listen, im here ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "The Bathroom Floor" by lordshadow
- "damn, what a gutshot! wow this was awesome, this was the first work i've read in about six months. i just came back and i'm glad to be welcomed back with such a piece."
Posted by Graveyard_Desciple on "The Bathroom Floor" by lordshadow
- "the strain and pain that goes along with wishing for closure , and distance ... yet caught up mesmerized in the life of every moment ... this was excellent .. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Blue" by lordshadow
- "'I wrote her name on a cheap restaurant napkin' Great opening line. I can feel the multitudal layers of blue you have painted in this moving poem... well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Blue" by lordshadow
- "great piece, very creative and well thought out. would you choose sorrow, pain or love. wow. I think life must be a choice cause most people are into one of the above."
Posted by Unknown on "If" by lordshadow
- "I could have sworn that I commented on this piece, but it appears my memory fails again. This packs a punch that completely blows every shred of my being into shocked nothingness... It is of the high quality I have come to love seeing from you..."
Posted by Raven on "Things I Wish I Would Have Said (Instead I Said...)" by lordshadow
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