The Right to Remain Silent
By lordshadow
This is a message
to all who are blessed with
family and friends who weren't selfish
but selfless
and stood up for a cause
that all you deemed senseless
now you protest against conflicts
that don't seem to have endings
young women and men
serve a president's beckon
while he's sending more children
to do his dirty deeds for him
whether in agreement or not
they fight with ferocity
and they don't give two shits
about sharing democracy
hypocrisy hovers
over every essay
that someone else wrote
for him to read on the tv
and all they believe in
is that they're doing what's right
until they turn on the news
and see you every night
hypocrites march on
the lawn with their pickets
as they play the life lottery
and cash in losing tickets
because to them this is life
and this isn't a game
and you are the reason
they're all dying in vain
while you wave white flags for them
with yellow bows on your cars
with nothing but papercuts
as your own battlescars
taking for granted having
both feet and both hands
while you're standing in line
soldiers make their last stand
ex-soldiers/now cops
try to get you to disperse
"but these are my rights!
and this amendment, the first!"
but nothing you say
could ever stop all the violence
while they defend your "free speech"
you have the right to remain silent
Comments on "The Right to Remain Silent"
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On Monday, January 2, 2006, AHHH
(184) wrote:
ah nice. i loved this. we do take it for granite. i'd voice my opinion, but i felt like i got told to shut up. and it was great.
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A former member wrote:
*Shivers* You've sent chills down my spine with amazing ferocity. This has an almost flawless scheme to it, and even those words that don't rhyme fit together with perfect clarity. Wonderful write. *Evangel*
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On Sunday, December 18, 2005, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
sometimes words that don't rhyme mean more than those that do. thank you for the kind words.
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On Sunday, December 18, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
since wars begin in the minds of men, it is in the minds of men that the defense of peace must be constructed...
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On Sunday, December 18, 2005, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
I'm curious, is this you're own quote or that of someone else... either way it's awesome...thanks for always being there to leave kind words ~josh
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On Sunday, December 18, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
it is a quote from someone else...and thank you for always giving me a refreshing perspective and insightful words to ponder ~kristy
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On Sunday, December 18, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
Amen to this.........i couldn't agree more........i think it's amazing how clean and blood free the hands 'appear' to be around the world these days