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""praying for death every morning in the rain" oh my god. i am stunned. honestly. *fav* this was just wow. the way you structured it. the ending.the repetition, the pauses. especially in the slipping part. just wow."
Posted by dying angel on "my.favorite. LOVE \PoeM/" by ashottothetemple

"Thought provoking. Mysterious and deeply written from a beautiful heart. Stunningly amazing."
Posted by K_Love on "my.favorite. LOVE \PoeM/" by ashottothetemple

""Please; make it work again?" Aside from the way you formatted this, with all the = and __ and ::, I enjoyed this greatly. Perhaps next time, just use words? Excellent piece though. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "my.favorite. LOVE \PoeM/" by ashottothetemple

"Very, very cool. Write the hell on."
Posted by Alanarchy on "|?WhenDidTheMusicDie!|" by ashottothetemple

"Beautiful. "I can't seem to make sense of your self affliction retailation" Hard hitting. Deeply written. Wonderful write, love."
Posted by K_Love on "|?WhenDidTheMusicDie!|" by ashottothetemple

"It certainly is beautiful. One of the best you've ever written, maybe even the best. Soft spoken, hard hitting."
Posted by K_Love on ""You-Wouldn't-Believe-Me-If-I-Told-You" =kind of love" by ashottothetemple

"pure and beautiful. "I love you, you saved me... ahh damn."
Posted by Unknown on ""You-Wouldn't-Believe-Me-If-I-Told-You" =kind of love" by ashottothetemple

""I’m going to sew you lips shut… I’m going to end your tyranny for good" You've always had a way with captivating me. Like sinking a hook in my bottom lip and pulling 'til I scream for you. This is intense. Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "How Could You Love Me?" by ashottothetemple

"this was pretty good, had nice compact lines that flowed well with one another and a gritty ending, some real gusto displayed. I like it, good effort all round..Col."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "How Could You Love Me?" by ashottothetemple

"I'll stop your torment... perfect emotion. t/y"
Posted by Unknown on "How Could You Love Me?" by ashottothetemple

"Beautiful, I fucking love it as you know. You floor me everytime baby. I'm amazed. "
Posted by K_Love on "How Could You Love Me?" by ashottothetemple

"this was truly a great read ... bent your truth into spitting sarcasm ... convincing ... cool ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Tin Foil Love" by ashottothetemple

"hi kool poem. im ijustkilledmyself i just started on this site i have about 10 poems u might like so far id appreciate some new readers thanks"
Posted by Unknown on "Love spell from a potion never named" by ashottothetemple

""you could kiss acid and make flowers" I love it, thats the best line I have heard in a long time!"
Posted by Unknown on "Love spell from a potion never named" by ashottothetemple

"wrap it in sandpaper.... grit 30;) "
Posted by elisa on "Tin Foil Love" by ashottothetemple

"You really painted an incredible tale here with amazing imagery. Simply stunning."
Posted by SorrowSoul on "Leprechaun" by ashottothetemple

"what a passionate write. it's beautiful to see that such love can exist."
Posted by bloody LOVEly on "My Dear" by ashottothetemple

"written at such a different time, and yet exactly how I feel today. You proved the complication of this situation in your words. I love it."
Posted by bloody LOVEly on "Please, One more, Please" by ashottothetemple

"....wonderful....lack of words....great write...."
Posted by vaultgrl on "Rape Me until I'm Lovin' It" by ashottothetemple

"Great write. Enjoyed the ending. :p ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "My Dear" by ashottothetemple

"...love the approach you used, great write!..."
Posted by vaultgrl on "Broken Glass Rose" by ashottothetemple

"love it, and I really feel the last verse...."
Posted by vaultgrl on "MasK" by ashottothetemple

"Caution: Do not read in public. -_-"
Posted by Unknown on "Please, One more, Please" by ashottothetemple

"Word. I'm currently in the same situation. Don't even think I could express it as eloquently, though."
Posted by eastpatient on "Please, One more, Please" by ashottothetemple

"Brilliant and intense, I loved this."
Posted by Kaja on "Please, One more, Please" by ashottothetemple

"Heartbreaking, and drenching, every word pure and beautiful. So damn real. Lovely write"
Posted by K_Love on "Please, One more, Please" by ashottothetemple

"Saddening.. very sad. Beautiful job, I don't know what to say, I'm speechless. Great write."
Posted by K_Love on "Rape Me until I'm Lovin' It" by ashottothetemple

"intriguing title...and awesome write.."
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "Rape Me until I'm Lovin' It" by ashottothetemple

"wow good write ~~GAP~~"
Posted by Unknown on "Rape Me until I'm Lovin' It" by ashottothetemple

"very nice"
Posted by chaos on "Rape Me until I'm Lovin' It" by ashottothetemple

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