Tin Foil Love

By ashottothetemple

I did all I could
Not to go breathless
It's like I wanted you to rape me
But you made me use protection
Clever girl
Tin foil on my flesh did the trick
You didn't catch
What I offered
You did create a new home version
Hysterectomy
If only you hadn't
Thrown out the lube
It's a metaphor, you see?
This sex we have
It's like driving while
Fucking Dead

Dedicate this, breathe me in as soon as you can

I'll hold my head up and you can vomit for me, Fear not
It's not that I'm sick of you
It is that I get sick
From all this cum I choke on from our fore fathers
And The shit I've been fed about safety during sex
I'll be safe, I'll be safe
I'll wear a spiked armwarmer
When I fist you tonight.

Safety in numbers so bring your friends, We can blow them too.

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© 2006 Brandon
Published on Wednesday, March 8, 2006.     Filed under: "Perverse" and "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Thursday, June 12, 2008, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Brilliant honesty, searingly good..Write the hell on :)

  • capt_funguy On Thursday, March 9, 2006, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    this was truly a great read ... bent your truth into spitting sarcasm ... convincing ... cool ... funguy

  • elisa On Wednesday, March 8, 2006, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    wrap it in sandpaper.... grit 30;)

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