Rape Me until I'm Lovin' It

By ashottothetemple

I can still feel the exaustion
Lingering steam on my glasses
A bottle lays at your feet
The spilt pills say it all
You came back just to kill someone
Intensions are worse than razors
You wanted one of us gone by tonight
Looks like it was finders, pill poppers
A whole bottle of ambien, yeah you'll sleep

Night, Night

Sleep Tight

Because I can't stop your drowning tonight

At least you died clean

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Copyright 2005 Brandon J Bradley
Published on Friday, March 11, 2005.     Filed under: "Adult" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: short, sweet to the point. lovely write. ~Silver~

  • MESUN On Saturday, June 9, 2007, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    well that was short and simple, yet subtle. (yea for s words) I particularly enjoyed the last few verses, in my head they sounded very nursery rhymish and I have twisted sense of humor so it fit right in.

  • vaultgrl On Thursday, June 23, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    ....wonderful....lack of words....great write....

  • K_Love On Sunday, March 13, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Saddening.. very sad. Beautiful job, I don't know what to say, I'm speechless. Great write.

  • The Crimson Queen On Saturday, March 12, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    intriguing title...and awesome write..

  • A former member wrote: wow good write ~~GAP~~

  • sIo On Saturday, March 12, 2005, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    damn, this was harsh. nice job.

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