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Rape Me until I'm Lovin' It
By ashottothetemple
I can still feel the exaustion
Lingering steam on my glasses
A bottle lays at your feet
The spilt pills say it all
You came back just to kill someone
Intensions are worse than razors
You wanted one of us gone by tonight
Looks like it was finders, pill poppers
A whole bottle of ambien, yeah you'll sleep
Night, Night
Sleep Tight
Because I can't stop your drowning tonight
At least you died clean
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Copyright 2005 Brandon J Bradley
Comments on "Rape Me until I'm Lovin' It"
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A former member wrote:
short, sweet to the point. lovely write. ~Silver~
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On Saturday, June 9, 2007, MESUN
(230)
wrote:
well that was short and simple, yet subtle. (yea for s words) I particularly enjoyed the last few verses, in my head they sounded very nursery rhymish and I have twisted sense of humor so it fit right in.
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On Thursday, June 23, 2005, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
....wonderful....lack of words....great write....
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On Sunday, March 13, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Saddening.. very sad. Beautiful job, I don't know what to say, I'm speechless. Great write.
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On Saturday, March 12, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
intriguing title...and awesome write..
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A former member wrote:
wow good write ~~GAP~~
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On Saturday, March 12, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
damn, this was harsh. nice job.
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