Comments by All Members
- "this poem reminds of a booked called "thirteen reasons why" by jay asher yo shouldead it. i like your poem it remindsme of the time went to new york"
Posted by Unknown on "Forget Me" by emeraldgrace
- "Ah, condradictions... how funny they are. You've done the word right with this peice. I quite enjoyed this. Short, but to the point."
Posted by Unknown on "Contradictions" by emeraldgrace
- "Being a little tipsy myself at the moment, I really appreciate this. I may be back to comment more, but only if I remember. Anyway, great harnessing of the moment, and the rhyme was fun to read."
Posted by Liz on "Tell Me, Im Drunk" by emeraldgrace
- "Repeat after me: I am a good person.
But seriously, we all have felt this way at times. Good write, one we all can relate to."
Posted by Gideon Lost on "Forget Me" by emeraldgrace
- "very very interesting...*playing the body like music Pain*....very nice line in a gently written emotive piece....thanks for making me think....-knight"
Posted by knightmirror on "Whirlwind" by emeraldgrace
- "not in the sense you mean.. more as the fear of it. the possibility for it lasting is always there. and i mean to damn well try to keep it."
Posted by emeraldgrace on "Essence of Life" by emeraldgrace
- "There's so many thoughts in this poem - all scattered around, almost like a reflection of a damaged and confused sense of existance... "
Posted by Unknown on "Human Existance" by emeraldgrace
- "I have even used the same words. And also in the contex of longing, thereby being personal and not dedicated. Hell the whole poem and pictures I get from it, is to be admired by me ;) -Nadir-
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Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Sensual Instinct" by emeraldgrace
- "That is beautiful. And "to ancient drums of old sensual chaos" ... It is universal I think. I may have written a few hundred poems to what I admire in women, or dedicated. And that line contains the exact picture of what I admire. "
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Sensual Instinct" by emeraldgrace
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