Human Existance
By emeraldgrace
Loneliness is the thief
of our childhood
fear is the convict of life
still trying to grip reality
while our minds are
slowly dying
red-tinged tears
on ivory skin
eyes like a storm
on the open sea
unseeing all but
tortured souls
tired bodies all around
an eternal tunnel
with too many turns
always ending up lost
forever in a dark room
a single flame illuminating
a sunken face
devoid of hope
heart bleeding with
twistedly shrieking pain
when the metal bites
the skin
drinking in the last remnants
of pitiful human existance.
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Copyright 2004 emeraldgrace
Published on Sunday, August 8, 2004.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Human Existance"
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A former member wrote:
There's so many thoughts in this poem - all scattered around, almost like a reflection of a damaged and confused sense of existance...
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, The Fallen Angel
(234) wrote:
an evil and betwixing piece::fallen one::
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On Sunday, August 8, 2004, JiNx
(98) wrote:
Wow... I like it alot, very impressive! *JiNx*
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A former member wrote:
hell yeah, this is a great write here emerald, impressive, some great imagery and well constructed verse here. well done.