Human Existance

By emeraldgrace

Loneliness is the thief
of our childhood
fear is the convict of life
still trying to grip reality
while our minds are
slowly dying
red-tinged tears
on ivory skin
eyes like a storm
on the open sea
unseeing all but
tortured souls
tired bodies all around
an eternal tunnel
with too many turns
always ending up lost
forever in a dark room
a single flame illuminating
a sunken face
devoid of hope
heart bleeding with
twistedly shrieking pain
when the metal bites
the skin
drinking in the last remnants
of pitiful human existance.

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Copyright 2004 emeraldgrace
Published on Sunday, August 8, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: There's so many thoughts in this poem - all scattered around, almost like a reflection of a damaged and confused sense of existance...

  • The Fallen Angel On Sunday, August 8, 2004, The Fallen Angel (234)By person wrote:

    an evil and betwixing piece::fallen one::

  • JiNx On Sunday, August 8, 2004, JiNx (98)By person wrote:

    Wow... I like it alot, very impressive! *JiNx*

  • A former member wrote: hell yeah, this is a great write here emerald, impressive, some great imagery and well constructed verse here. well done.

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