Comments by All Members
- "wonderful...i love the ending!!! the whole judgmental dismissals...."
Posted by Unknown on "Concubine" by Linwe
- "As I said, it's not yet finished... It really has to be improved, so don't be shocked if it's unclear."
Posted by Linwe on "Our last kiss" by Linwe
- ""Twinkling little eyes Oh so scraed to see All the pretty lies Of what I'll never be" Ahh..this i like! TPD."
Posted by TornPaperDoll on "Concubine" by Linwe
- ""Rain sluices down and washes the remains away Like tears will do to the pain, which is not to stay". Exceptionally beautiful . . a fragility, indeed. "
Posted by Unknown on "Torment is over" by Linwe
- "It's not even that it was unrequited... I know damn well that my ex-boyfriend loved me to bits.. it's just that he..changed... saying things that hurt too much while there was a sweet meaning behind them... But it hurt TOO much. It wasn't unrequited..just"
Posted by Linwe on "The desecration of Love" by Linwe
- "This is a wonderful write; I particularly like the final line. Although your profile promises that your english vocabulary isn't big enough to play with gorgeous words, I beg to differ. "You drowned yourself in oil But you floated on it The infernal dance"
Posted by Unknown on "Desillusionated by the mystifying beauty of a crime" by Linwe
