Comments by All Members
- "I really liked how this poet related "reality" to fiction. After all the reality we have created as a society, is in fact all an illusion. Media is manipulation, debt is fiction, government is a corporation, money is a hoax."
Posted by Unknown on "soldier" by toy soldier
- "i like this quite a bit. it feels a tad forced at times but overall its good. i always find that going back to a piece once im removed from the situation helps me to improve the poem"
Posted by Unknown on "next to you." by toy soldier
- "what a lovely moment youve captured here. deep with insight and beautiful imagery ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "peace" by toy soldier
- "Oh, this is just gorgeous.. *smiles* ..so so lovely.. you've touched upon so many emotions and memories in so few words.. these words reach out to each of us, in a different way, I think.. and that's a beautiful thing.. "
Posted by Unknown on "maybe another night, you and i." by toy soldier
- "this is very interesting...and the ending was a loaded gun. this poem fascinates me, and it's so devastatingly portrayed."
Posted by Unknown on "soldier" by toy soldier
- ""thats all i can seem to see
"but i can never seem to say good-bye
when i think of you, under that moon lit sky"- beautifully put..this was mesmerizing.shattering. and completly tragic. wellwritten piece."
Posted by Unknown on "maybe another night, you and i." by toy soldier
- "there's something about your poetry that just seems.....familiar. I can't quite put my finger on it. But i feel like i know you......love this piece. It's actually a very unique perspective"
Posted by Unknown on "smile softly" by toy soldier
- "...thanks for sharing....i really like the emotion in this, and that it's so real....i can see an innocent 2 yr old wise beyond her years, turning away from a faceless man....great write...."
Posted by vaultgrl on "that girl" by toy soldier
- "you nailed it. put into words something I never really wanted to, but you did it and it was awesome."
Posted by lordshadow on "soldier" by toy soldier
- "like a conversation either with yourself, or the one you love but can't have. Either way, wonderful."
Posted by lordshadow on "of you" by toy soldier
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