Comments by All Members
- "wrapped up so neatly.. you really hit your stride in the fourth verse... i'm breathless and wilting beneath the weight of your shadows... missed this and you... dearly as ever if not more. x"
Posted by Unknown on "cognitive passages " by indefined
- "ah yes, something cerebral, as only the man from oz can produce... i admire the synapses that fire along the strings holding the multi-verse to themes we've come to see but never know... how art does capture nature in ways that always depend from an unattainable sky-canopy, a tapestry in perpetual descent despite ceaseless expansion; *bows* thanks for the repost, much enjoyed; it has been some time, hope all is well in oz... "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "a painting hangs itself" by indefined
- ""timeless, shadow of the clock
bearing the monotony within
a construct of temporal motion" - great lines! I am enjoying reading your work. It looks like you may have been a member previously...do I know you by a different name? "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "ink injected" by indefined
- ""overwhelms the
artist's strokes
and the frame frames
a mirror instead " - I love that line especially! I was just reading something last night that had a quote that went something like 'everything an artist chooses to paint is really a self-portrait'. I like the notion. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "a painting hangs itself" by indefined
- "this feels like the removal of a soul.splinter ... 'the prick that always bleeds' is a cracking good line... and the closure is comforting and somehow familiar... ~"
Posted by kinkifrog on "spirals in fine fibres" by indefined
- "I really enjoyed this one. You can really handle the descriptive words. I felt a paintbrush working in my mind. I loved it so much because it wasn't a clear picture. but foggy and left for interpretation. I like it better that way. I can't wait to read more of your work."
Posted by Unknown on "muted ballad ballerina (with Rain In The Willows)" by indefined
