Comments by All Members
- "" Sometimes my mind goes running away from me
like a dog goes after a ball
that was never thrown" i like that...makes me laugh, but i also understand the feeling."
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "Shelter" by Dolly_Fatale
- ""A reopened wound hurts more the second time...
the third...and then twenty..." thats the fucking truth! :) nice to see your still alive...great write hun"
Posted by The Crimson Queen on "I Feel Fine" by Dolly_Fatale
- "Ohhhhh yes...strands of pain straight from the soul of heartbreak...each line digging deeper and deeper into the psyche...systematic and naturally beautiful.Not shit.;)"
Posted by suicideseason on "Love is an affliction" by Dolly_Fatale
- "And what is life without hope? What is life without love? This piece gave me too many images to count, and my heart might've skipped a few beats. The ending drew blood. Exquisite work."
Posted by Six-Out on "Collapse" by Dolly_Fatale
- "So many amazing lines I could quote.. I think more people should read your works, this is so haunting. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "Forced Memories" by Dolly_Fatale
- "You can tell by your writing that you have a lot of talent. "unconsciously holding my breath".. lines like this I love, because they hold truth with them.. The kind of things we do that go un-noticed to us. Good write. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "You..." by Dolly_Fatale
- "Heh, I was wondering what kind of person you were talking about, that's how kmich you go me tricked! Makes the poem even better than it already is anyway"
Posted by Linwe on "She" by Dolly_Fatale
- "yes, i agree with funguy completely... beautiful and subtle, gentle... with quiet hope... lovely piece. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "Dance" by Dolly_Fatale
- "beautiful subtlety ... much style and grace ... an apparent ease ... wonderful /unusual approach ... great write ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Dance" by Dolly_Fatale
- "didnt expect the ending--but the poem is very beautiful and clear--I really love your word choice and flow-as always ;)"
Posted by Northstar on "She" by Dolly_Fatale
- "Captivating. Trust is the most fragile of gifts and too often it's broken. I've felt these words so many times but could never express them as beautifully and fluidly as you have done here. GREAT write. *favs* -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "Sense of Your Understanding" by Dolly_Fatale
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