Dance

By Dolly_Fatale

There's a woman
and she's suffocating
beneath the whirlwinds of reality
She's all caught up
within the cobwebs of personality
and there are tears that fall like rain
musical tyranny
pitter-patterring off concrete
telling stories laced with irony
Of a little girl
who drowns within the woman
the woman who straight-jackets her up within the facade
of who she dreams to be

I wanted to tell her secrets, that little girl
build a river out of her despair
and sail it with paper ships down a trail
leading so far away
but the little girl is silenced
unbearable memories muted
of a childhood filled with unnameables

So i'll hold you close
and with lips pressed against your chest
i'll sing you secrets
hoping the little girl inside will hear
and dance
.
.
.
and dance

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Copyright 2004 Dolly_Fatale
Published on Sunday, July 11, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, February 6, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    aww..AWESOME!! wow..you amaze me

  • capt_funguy On Friday, July 23, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    beautiful subtlety ... much style and grace ... an apparent ease ... wonderful /unusual approach ... great write ... funguy

  • purr_verse On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    yes, i agree with funguy completely... beautiful and subtle, gentle... with quiet hope... lovely piece. :)

  • so_skeevy On Thursday, July 15, 2004, so_skeevy (64)By person wrote:

    i like this

  • glasshouse On Thursday, July 15, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    I love this piece. I love it. I'll be reading more as well. If all your pieces have this much raw imagery and emotion, you'll have a great stay here. Loved it. -Glass

  • KittyStryker On Sunday, July 11, 2004, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    very lovely, sexy girl!

  • Dolly_Fatale On Monday, July 12, 2004, Dolly_Fatale (29)By person wrote:

    wow, you think im sexy!

  • Alacer_Cogitatus On Sunday, July 11, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (140)By person wrote:

    good. i liked this, i will definatly read more. A_C

  • Dolly_Fatale On Monday, July 12, 2004, Dolly_Fatale (29)By person wrote:

    well thankew. i can't promise new works will come quickly (i'm just starting to write again after a 2+ yr block), but thanks's for the encouragement and hopefully what's to come sustains your interest

  • glasshouse On Thursday, July 15, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    I'm glad you started again, you've got a lot of talent. Dont stop. I'll be crushed. -Glass

  • Dolly_Fatale On Thursday, July 15, 2004, Dolly_Fatale (29)By person wrote:

    Thank you a lot, darlin'. Your words mean much. Hopefully I never become blocked again. I, aswell, will be crushed if I do.

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