Sense of Your Understanding

By Dolly_Fatale

Did you know the stories I told you
had never even formed
words
before today
and I felt the need to fight
tears
as they slipped off my tongue
so tender with notes of misery
like licking powder off the
sharpest razorblade

In my words I handed you
pieces
of me
Ones no one has ever seen
let alone been trusted with
Pieces even I never knew
could find seperation
from myself

Somehow...
there was comfort found in peeling scabs
off the most carefully avoided
wounds

I'd let them bleed out every tainted
secret
Would this feeling remain:
...this...
sense of your understanding

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Copyright 2004 Dolly_Fatale
Published on Sunday, July 18, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • capt_funguy On Friday, July 23, 2004, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    line by line , heartcrush impressive .. simple connection wish , amplified by possibility of realization ... fantastic ... funguy

  • glasshouse On Monday, July 19, 2004, glasshouse (530)By person wrote:

    Captivating. Trust is the most fragile of gifts and too often it's broken. I've felt these words so many times but could never express them as beautifully and fluidly as you have done here. GREAT write. *favs* -Glass

  • Lemons On Sunday, July 18, 2004, Lemons (46)By person wrote:

    wonderful.

  • Northstar On Sunday, July 18, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    This poem really struck me--beautiful expression of your emotions--it takes my breath away.

  • Dolly_Fatale On Sunday, July 18, 2004, Dolly_Fatale (29)By person wrote:

    your words mean a lot

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