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By Dolly_Fatale

I know there’s a universe inside you
fearful of where I may tread
in danger
--I may pick an improper flower
           …skip rocks into rivers whom find it hard enough just to flow
I’ve heard the laugh of a little girl
--with my ear pressed against your chest--
as she bound into the tidal’s
            of an insomniac sea
She fell into silence
lacking a savior
--For I was too weak to jump walls you refused to let crumble

            …traced my fingertips across your hallow
            --hoped to find hidden crevices
                        to crawl beneath your skin
                      to save Hope from drowning
Walls collapsed
--far too late
A scrap of a girl
            left to resuscitate
a muted voice
within a mouth that held the verdict
                        For, without Hope
                                    I fear Love dies of loneliness

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Copyright 2004 Dolly_Fatale
Published on Friday, November 12, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: THIS is an incredible poem.

  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, February 6, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    wow...any comment just wouldn't do this justice...AWESOME!!! ~AoD

  • A former member wrote: Wonderful work.

  • Six-Out On Saturday, January 29, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    And what is life without hope? What is life without love? This piece gave me too many images to count, and my heart might've skipped a few beats. The ending drew blood. Exquisite work.

  • A former member wrote: What, words? One. WOW! -END-

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