Collapse
By Dolly_Fatale
I know there’s a universe inside you
fearful of where I may tread
in danger
--I may pick an improper flower
…skip rocks into rivers whom find it hard enough
just to flow
I’ve heard the laugh of a little girl
--with my ear pressed against your chest--
as she bound into the tidal’s
of an insomniac sea
She fell into silence
lacking a savior
--For I was too weak to jump walls you refused to let crumble
…traced my fingertips across your hallow
--hoped to find hidden crevices
to crawl beneath your skin
to save Hope from drowning
Walls collapsed
--far too late
A scrap of a girl
left to resuscitate
a muted voice
within a mouth that held the verdict
For, without Hope
I fear Love dies of loneliness
Comments on "Collapse"
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A former member wrote:
THIS is an incredible poem.
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On Sunday, February 6, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
wow...any comment just wouldn't do this justice...AWESOME!!! ~AoD
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful work.
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On Saturday, January 29, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
And what is life without hope? What is life without love? This piece gave me too many images to count, and my heart might've skipped a few beats. The ending drew blood. Exquisite work.
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A former member wrote:
What, words? One. WOW! -END-