Comments by All Members
- "I hate how cellphones replaced real conversations..and how rather then calling or stopping by people rather text/email..or hop on facebook. :/ Anyways I love the creative way you captured the loss of conversation..you put some great words into place and overall this was an awesome write :) much enjoyed"
Posted by River Lily on "The Art of Conversation" by saltyman65
- "Wonderful. "falsely bent" is pure genius. this is truly spectacular and agree with Cantara that more should read you. Just wonderful."
Posted by tmanzano on "Reality" by saltyman65
- "I am both the speaker and the subject in this piece-multiple times a day. Great piece on every day occurrences that is never written about. "
Posted by Cantara on "Blond Ponytails" by saltyman65
- "This is brilliant. Simple and intelligent. Always an impressive combination difficult to achieve. Much admiration!"
Posted by Cantara on "Karma" by saltyman65
- "I have been trying, by sheer force of will, to understand and thereby enjoy short poetry. It's working, but really I was just using this as a warm up."
Posted by Unknown on "Karma" by saltyman65
- "Faceless beings concocted into what others seek and desire us to become. Vivid imagery and well structured. Each stanza built up a strong intensity to reveal the wickedness in this world. Such a gifted poet♥ -Bows"
Posted by soul_versing on "The Cocktail Party" by saltyman65
- "I saw your blackberries and twittering as social media references and the arthropods , so named , for the masks and clothes worn like exoskeletons...I saw a whole lot of effort employed in the pursuit of little of importance...as , 'Much ado about nothing ' ... I like it ...I think you need 'their' proboscises ...and thanks"
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Cocktail Party" by saltyman65
- "Beautiful poem, I love the subtlety of how the horror is actually lurking inside of the person. The unusual layout contributed to the sense of suppressed/buried impulses. This is the first poem I have encountered on this site and it makes me keen to read more of your work! "
Posted by Unknown on "The Dark Season" by saltyman65
- "This was visually pleasing from the beauty of the beginning to the gloom of the ending, very nicely penned :)"
Posted by River Lily on "End Time" by saltyman65
- "The breath of winter SM, heralding a common end perhaps, with the dank, cold of the waiting grave. The seasons change, and what once was makes way for the next renewal. Dead bugs and tombstones, well done! "
Posted by dwells on "End Time" by saltyman65
- "It's always a pleasant relief to notice the little things and how they can mean so much more than the big picture. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Pine Barrens " by saltyman65
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