Comments by All Members
- ""She darks her lips and her fence of teeth. His fist against her feels tranquil." this line; wow. covering the mirrors reminds me of the concept with sitting shiva; mourning. "
Posted by Cassette on "excruciating" by anaksunamun
- "I'm not sure how I missed your voice from here but you are stunning and I am so very impressed by your words. "
Posted by Cassette on "howl" by anaksunamun
- ""Our dead are never dead to us, until we have forgotten them." ~ George Elliot"
Posted by Lab Rat on "pallor" by anaksunamun
- "I miss you. I've been re reading you today and you've weighed on my mind *·*·*·.... for you"
Posted by Lilith Black on "_In" by anaksunamun
- "Missing you little lady and your captivating writing. I keep a candle in the window and light it when it is dark. "
Posted by Magdalena on "excruciating" by anaksunamun
- "Even when one dies, the other seahorse remains alone. They do not find another. They are irriplacable. I didnt have the heart to add this last part to my first comment "
Posted by Cantara on "_In" by anaksunamun
- "I came in just to comment on this captivating piece of writing... I lay in my bed and at times I would feel the cold pierce my pores and the brush of breath against my hair, in my alone-ness. I had a dream once that I have to tell you about.. I connected with your wonderful writing my beautiful friend. "
Posted by Magdalena on "pallor" by anaksunamun
- "I especially love the line "you were the most beautiful mirror ever made" - that seems to encapsulate the whole of this piece. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "pallor" by anaksunamun
- "Loving the sound of music more when the battery is almost dead.. I just love that. That simple statement expresses much of your unique and unusual creative style. Other worldly. Some have called it odd.. value those remarks and be proud because leaving lasting marks on those you reach is what you do. Elegantly."
Posted by Cantara on "Electricity is Ahrimanic." by anaksunamun
- "" His fist against her feels tranquil." - holy cow, that line was casually brutal. I also like the notion of covering the mirrors so death can not find them. Excellent piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "excruciating" by anaksunamun
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