By anaksunamun




so many deaths along the way, inner deaths

city of sad
and trembling lips
where to find refuge under your jaw/
split face to
share invisible slices of hosts falling out of orbit

brother of my brother
let me love you


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Copyright 2014 anaksunamun
Published on Friday, October 10, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Wednesday, December 9, 2020, Jonas Robinson (881)By person wrote:

    Deep stuff. I enjoyed this because of the haunting rhetoric and unique voice. Thank you for sharing and congrats on poem of the day. :)

  • Cassette On Thursday, December 28, 2017, Cassette (1152)By person wrote:


  • A former member wrote: Excellent...dark Beauty, Poes sister, Shelleys mistress...

  • A former member wrote: Wow.....poetry like this brings me to my knees. Please. Let me write like you, please. One day.. I am in love.

  • Phalanx On Tuesday, March 25, 2014, Phalanx (677)By person wrote:

    A curser is not a stain and so I comment. I just don't know where to stop the blood. Nice work.

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, March 25, 2014, FadedBlues (2178)By person wrote:

    ...stunning poetry. I don't attempt to analyze the underlying meaning, but I am joyful to read it...

  • anaksunamun On Tuesday, March 25, 2014, anaksunamun (91)By person wrote:

    Thank you , you are very kind

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