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pale
By anaksunamun
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so many deaths along the way, inner deaths
O
city of sad
and trembling lips
where to find refuge under your jaw/
split face to
share invisible slices of hosts falling out of orbit
brother of my brother
let me love you
â–²
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Copyright 2014 anaksunamun
Published on Friday, October 10, 2014.
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On Wednesday, December 9, 2020, Jonas Robinson
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wrote:
Deep stuff. I enjoyed this because of the haunting rhetoric and unique voice. Thank you for sharing and congrats on poem of the day. :)
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On Thursday, December 28, 2017, Cassette
(1144) wrote:
stunning
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A former member wrote:
Excellent...dark Beauty, Poes sister, Shelleys mistress...
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A former member wrote:
Wow.....poetry like this brings me to my knees. Please. Let me write like you, please. One day.. I am in love.
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On Tuesday, March 25, 2014, Phalanx
(678) wrote:
A curser is not a stain and so I comment. I just don't know where to stop the blood. Nice work.
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On Tuesday, March 25, 2014, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...stunning poetry. I don't attempt to analyze the underlying meaning, but I am joyful to read it...
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On Tuesday, March 25, 2014, anaksunamun
(91) wrote:
Thank you , you are very kind
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