ave maria

By anaksunamun

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whatever light scuffed vox winds I had caught are lost through window breaks.



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a man.
how useless he is.
inhuman.but beautiful 

brahms bluely rolling cars rosary gold glass needles and rum skittles in my cheek
I should have just strangled you in your sleep massaging your drowsy paws having some pity for you like a baby crying on the new york steam boats at night.

















In your romeo vein
in your
sleepy
sleep
sleep









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Copyright 2014 anaksunamun
Published on Wednesday, April 9, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Cassette On Tuesday, January 2, 2018, Cassette (1087)By person wrote:

    this feels like church stained glass...

  • worm On Sunday, July 16, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    I like it~

  • Star On Tuesday, April 15, 2014, Star (879)By person wrote:

    this is dark and deep but dauntingly beautiful. this left my brain wanting more. your breathless words made me smile. (:

  • haunted On Thursday, April 10, 2014, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    whatever light scuffed vox winds I have caught are lost in window breaks. I had to come back to this....forgive and forget. I just love that, you have such a way with words. forgiveness to be given in the path of broken windows. cause now the problems over there, and no longer here. just beautiful.

  • anaksunamun On Thursday, April 10, 2014, anaksunamun (88)By person wrote:

    Thank you for your devotion and interest, for being receptive . Bless you ~*

  • haunted On Thursday, April 10, 2014, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    this is absolutely amazing. im in love with the first line. that is some serious thinking into something so angry but so beautifully written. the rest reminds me of a bitter rage and the detail of your thoughts are like holy crap! its awesome, this is very potent. I feel for the person in your mind that inspired this. its almost a cryptic hex as I read it. but yeah, super good poem!

  • megaprime81 On Wednesday, April 9, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Extremely disturbing, but extremely well written and conceived. 10

  • blue On Wednesday, April 9, 2014, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    You: Conjurer.

  • blue angel On Wednesday, April 9, 2014, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    Depths wane and pull with each chord.. I like it*

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