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ave maria
By anaksunamun
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whatever light scuffed vox winds I had caught are lost through window breaks.
.
a man.
how useless he is.
inhuman.but beautifulÂ
brahms bluely rolling cars rosary gold glass needles and rum skittles in
my cheek
I should have just strangled you in your sleep massaging your drowsy paws
having some pity for you like a baby crying on the new york steam boats
at night.
In your romeo vein
in your
sleepy
sleep
sleep
.
.
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Copyright 2014 anaksunamun
Published on Wednesday, April 9, 2014.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, January 2, 2018, Cassette
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wrote:
this feels like church stained glass...
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On Sunday, July 16, 2017, worm
(1194) wrote:
I like it~
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On Tuesday, April 15, 2014, Star
(920) wrote:
this is dark and deep but dauntingly beautiful. this left my brain wanting more. your breathless words made me smile. (:
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On Thursday, April 10, 2014, haunted
(850) wrote:
whatever light scuffed vox winds I have caught are lost in window breaks. I had to come back to this....forgive and forget. I just love that, you have such a way with words. forgiveness to be given in the path of broken windows. cause now the problems over there, and no longer here. just beautiful.
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On Thursday, April 10, 2014, anaksunamun
(91) wrote:
Thank you for your devotion and interest, for being receptive . Bless you ~*
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On Thursday, April 10, 2014, haunted
(850) wrote:
this is absolutely amazing. im in love with the first line. that is some serious thinking into something so angry but so beautifully written. the rest reminds me of a bitter rage and the detail of your thoughts are like holy crap! its awesome, this is very potent. I feel for the person in your mind that inspired this. its almost a cryptic hex as I read it. but yeah, super good poem!
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On Wednesday, April 9, 2014, megaprime81
(743) wrote:
Extremely disturbing, but extremely well written and conceived. 10
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On Wednesday, April 9, 2014, blue
(1454) wrote:
You: Conjurer.
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On Wednesday, April 9, 2014, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Depths wane and pull with each chord.. I like it*
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