nature triangle

By anaksunamun

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I pushed the split halves of your face together           
as if in the cracked chrysalis of flesh,gone, long gone,
I could still find you,          
the lucent beam,the unmade aperture still shining in the dust before you were born





Blessed who trains my hands for fingers ,
gloom cuts your months ;
standing between earth and hand











Time sinned the lord.
people are almost stone.






























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Copyright 2014 anaksunamun
Published on Saturday, January 18, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Cassette On Thursday, December 28, 2017, Cassette (1087)By person wrote:

    speechless... I've found a new favorite

  • Cassette On Tuesday, January 2, 2018, Cassette (1087)By person wrote:

    "Blessed who trains my hands for fingers" this line....

  • Oliver Twisted On Thursday, October 30, 2014, Oliver Twisted (53)By person wrote:

    A duality. Jesus and Lucifer both the Morning Sun? No! Can't be. Your poem perches and chants along with the wind on a beautiful marble mausoleum.

  • A former member wrote: Not sure why, but this reminded me of Stonehedge. I just saw a glimpse of it while reading it. Felt the atmosphere...I'd like to read this there. Another triumph. Lucid writing, I'm down to the high...

  • blue On Monday, March 17, 2014, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    I leave this comment every year or so... I wait and wait, sifting through the mindless banality that overwhelms this site every day hoping to find real and true poetry once again, the genuine article that stands illumined against the rest... Thank you! Your work has made that dredging wait worthwhile. Needless to say I am hanging on your every wonderful word. ~b

  • A former member wrote: What a wonderful compliment to this great poet but what a horrid insult to the rest of us. I'm speechless... haha!

  • kinkifrog On Wednesday, April 2, 2014, kinkifrog (2691)By person wrote:

    lol , that was my reaction , also :) Scholar

  • anaksunamun On Tuesday, March 25, 2014, anaksunamun (88)By person wrote:

    This is an amazing compliment , thank you so much , I appreciate the boost of confidence , as I was sure no one was reading.

  • blue On Sunday, March 30, 2014, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    You are certainly welcome. And don't worry overmuch, genuine, intelligent poetry is lost on the masses. It only means you are doing something right. Take comfort in that.

  • A former member wrote: Sounds like a devils triangel. Gory blood spattered ripped off face, wow, love that blood scene. Write more.

  • anaksunamun On Saturday, January 18, 2014, anaksunamun (88)By person wrote:

    No gore , nor devil here. only the creator piecing together a body broken by world . Thankyou

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