Comments by All Members
- "To eclipse places long bereft of man...this is the great work of poetry. I crumble with him there, observing the ruin of life equally as nonplussed. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "The Broken Gargoyle" by TheLastDragon
- "rock on!!!! express yourself it is clearly understood, and well worth the read. thanks
:)"
Posted by natalie on "Wheee!!!" by TheLastDragon
- "too many fallen heroes who fell for their beliefs...still are. excellent write... the imagery was perfect. thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "The Irish Martyr" by TheLastDragon
- "Lets see, in 2004, when you posted this, i was.....under the age of 10 lol. I don't know what went on, but I can tell for these words it was something that weighed heavy. Something thats left scars on many people. Very emotional write. Thanks for sharing"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "The Irish Martyr" by TheLastDragon
- "Holy shit. Just.......holy shit. Alchemist is right. Best read ever. What the hell man. You are awesome. Talent, you have, my friend. Talent and then some. Brava!!"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Why? (The Watcher)" by TheLastDragon
- "I love black. It's mystery, it's magic.....the sensualness of black. I dont know why. This poem is my new favorite. You made everything so vivid. So alive. There was life in every word. Thanks for sharing:)"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Patterns of Black" by TheLastDragon
- "You go guy! I've been trying different forms of poetry and prose since joining 2-3 months ago, and have done some noteworthy stuff (my opinion) that I never would have considered in my previous poet's life. I believe a good classical background is definitely a plus though - the rest seems to come easy after that. Thanks for this piece to contemplate. "
Posted by dwells on "Wheee!!!" by TheLastDragon
- "I'm sure even teacher would have to submit after reading this piece, boundless freedom with a hint of rhyme, almost like two different realms converging at the same point. A delightful mash-up, write onward. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Wheee!!!" by TheLastDragon
- "YAY!!! ... Wheeeeeeeee!! ... let the dragon freeeeee ... this could have been written for meeeeee...the teacher killed my poetreeeeeee ... ~smokes some more 'muse' ~"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Wheee!!!" by TheLastDragon
- "I like the way the flowers, monitors, the blip, all the room becomes the loss, foreboding description, patterns of black, very nice last line and concept overall for this dolorous final giving of life.... away. Well Wrought Work. Thank you."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Patterns of Black" by TheLastDragon
- "The meek shall inherit the earth...
Precious eulogy for a life's partner, when the lights are going out - Thanks for sharing"
Posted by dwells on "Patterns of Black" by TheLastDragon
- "'to make better use of precious moments , I'd never let go and always hold them' ... sad sometimes how it takes the realization that there's a finite amount of time left ; before we learn to make the most of the time we have...thanks for this most sombre reminder..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Patterns of Black" by TheLastDragon
- "brilliant write... I've written some pieces close to death and I must say this piece is heart felt... a fine ending, something I wasn't expecting... the machines all pray in a constant drone... great line... thanks for sharing "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Patterns of Black" by TheLastDragon
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