Comments by All Members
- "the progression of this work , from the so sweet clever opening , to the crashing conclusion , struck a thousand chords ... the last verse was simply amazing ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "not like the others" by missanthropic
- "flippin' beautiful ... absolutely startling detail ... the subtlety in effortless descriptions ... like the subtlety in effortless afternoons ... completely impressed ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "this day" by missanthropic
- "sighing as she succumbs to sorrow-there is a deep, heavy sadness here, even at the beginning...something terrible was destined to happen..."
Posted by girlafraid on "lamb chops" by missanthropic
- "with a multiplicitous fury
disrupting my tranquil autonomy-this line blew me away...what a horrifying tale you have woven here...expertly crafted to place me in your bed, and in your mind...wonderful work, once again"
Posted by girlafraid on "forty winks" by missanthropic
- "i see... free the heart trapped in the mind... but beware the hearts of others in your quest to be free... it is a humble and noble soul indeed that touches and yet does not trample..."
Posted by Mr King on "emancipation" by missanthropic
- "love... its beyond the common man's most self-righteous interpretations... yet exists right in the heart of said same common man given the right prompting... ironic."
Posted by Mr King on "martyrdom" by missanthropic
- "erudite and sharply, coldly chilling... and i absolutely love "with a multiplicitous fury" - it's just got such a great ring to it... Fine write indeed. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "forty winks" by missanthropic
- "exceptional use of the language here, structured well to flow nicely and full of subliminal meaning. Well done indeed.
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Posted by Unknown on "forty winks" by missanthropic
- "_i can't believe that noone has commented on this yet..."a canyon carved by the river of sorrows"...so vivid i can feel the pain.the last four lines end this voyage down memory lane superbly.awesome.:)"
Posted by suicideseason on "the grand canyon" by missanthropic
- "Miss, I will always love this poem. I was privileged to have you share this with me face to face once. Ever time I read it something new hits a nerve. Thank You. ~P.B~"
Posted by pushblood on "bad fish" by missanthropic
- "bleeds with endless breath
short but soo intense and impacting.
i dig your flowrey language when it melts soo smooth.
~Jade~"
Posted by Jadednoir on "forever" by missanthropic
- "'my soul called home' lovely.
'Bow to the vibrant source of your inner most bliss'
such a great view on human frailty and the power of mind....
this certainly shows yours
Splendid work....replaces unchartered for my favorite from you.....
~Jade~"
Posted by Jadednoir on "the trinity of self" by missanthropic
- "this is my favorite.
I love the globe metaphor, but more than that....the meat of this, what inspires you is so beautiful....
hope to see you at pats again....
~Jade~
p.s we need to write together....if you go for that sort of thing.
"
Posted by Jadednoir on "unchartered" by missanthropic
- "never taste of the fruit....
hey i am catholic and yep.....
Well I know this well, and you make it sound so sour.... did i mention I like sour candy?
This is nice.
~Jade~"
Posted by Jadednoir on "martyrdom" by missanthropic
- "_i'm losing my mind...i could have sworn that i commented on this...this is an ultra-painful four course meal of regret...as far as the eye can see...i think you wounded me."
Posted by suicideseason on "my sincerest apologies" by missanthropic
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