Comments by All Members
- "Holy. Each line is a microcosm in itself. I am viscerally perturbed, but satisfied with that. I love words that give rise to an internal battle and unite me with the characters in a way I could never unite with the characters I meet in person. You are impressive."
Posted by inhisbelly on "Glass Mercedes" by Numbers Peppelini
- "How much of oneself can be lost before it's no longer worth one more immediate fix? This piece reads like the downfall of a close friend: it's obvious they're sinking at a faster rate, but there's nothing you can do to slow their descent. Clearly, the verse of a skilled hand. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Glass Mercedes" by Numbers Peppelini
- "I fell into a deep thought reading the sadness in every line. Once you overcome this kind of heartache it only seems like it just keeps getting harder to forget. "like salt to an open wound." Unknown famous quote. I am beginning to think the person who quoted that first was in this same position. Written beautifully."
Posted by Unknown on "THE PASSING" by Numbers Peppelini
- "It's amazing how we make ourselves out to be undeserving of other because of the fate of situations. Whether this be real life, or a dream, the torment in itself unravels the preserved goodness of ones soul. Be careful not to lose all your precious pieces along the way, love. Bitterness tends to latch-on to heartache and bitterness takes total control. This is a very well scripted piece with many sentiments lovers tend to face. I'm guilty of destroying many breathtaking monuments, and I pray I didn't damage their perfect structures. Bows, sir- TG"
Posted by soul_versing on "THE PASSING" by Numbers Peppelini
- "It's unreal how beautiful this is! I am overcome with emotion. I don't believe that there are feelings women can't relate to as well (besides phallic sensations), though. The torture of longing is universal. I applaud the speakers mutedness--there is an underlying agony but no theatrics. Lovely work. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "THE PASSING" by Numbers Peppelini
- "..this is beautiful, man, in a way that only men understand. desiring that angel that doesn't realize it, & she dreams her vacuous dreams, & perhaps both our lives will be emptier..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "THE PASSING" by Numbers Peppelini
- "The street wise imagery is to die for. A many soul will undoubtedly tread the same path to that speedy departure :)~ Cool read, Numbers "
Posted by blue angel on "Veronica " by Numbers Peppelini
- "I'm very glad this was re-written... It breaths deeper now. I'm especially glad the all-caps were taken down from the title. I have a thing about all-caps. Anyway... I love the scene you set. Curtains are burning, audience, trampling each other in panic. Ceiling falling in. Show must go on. Show must go on. "
Posted by Alanarchy on "American Beauty { re-written]" by Numbers Peppelini
