Comments by All Members
- "It may be short, but it's perfect. If it were any longer it just wouldn't be as effective. I am taking a lot of interest in this. I like it very much."
Posted by Unknown on "hush" by nesbia
- "I beleive we can all reltae somehow to this. Very nicely written."
Posted by Unknown on "Confused" by nesbia
- "I love how you keep everything so short and to the point as if you're expressing a single thought in a single moment. Yet you word it just right so nothing is missing."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Screams" by nesbia
- "This is very interesting. So much going on in so few words. So much to think about... Wonderful!"
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "The end" by nesbia
- "I like how compact and direct you were with this piece. No one should have a hard time relating to this one."
Posted by Midnight Phoenix on "Wanted" by nesbia
- "wow...wanted to show how impressed i am but don't know how...loved it! ~Lynx~
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Posted by Unknown on "trash" by nesbia
- "Yes, sort of reminded me of The Omen as well...I like this...it's rather innocent."
Posted by Unknown on "hush" by nesbia
- "Great write, I loved the images that you gave me through your words.. the last 2 lines are very powerful! Awesome write ~Kirsten~"
Posted by K_Love on "Battered and Torn" by nesbia
- "This is good. great use of metaphor. I loved how you said your tears were scarring and your words acidic. good job."
Posted by Unknown on "Scarred" by nesbia
- "nice portrayal of the sad and lonely life of one who lives in fear."
Posted by Unknown on "My Prison" by nesbia
- "'A melody of mystery' absolutely exquisite! the dance of hidden feelings indeed, each step to the tune of our destruction. magnificent work, this."
Posted by Unknown on "Scarred" by nesbia
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