Confused

By nesbia

I need to cry
Don't know why

Everything spinning around me
Closing in on me

The walls I've built
Crumbling down

I want to smile
Can't help but frown

I want to live
Can't help but die
*~Rachel~*





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Copyright 2004 nesbia
Published on Tuesday, April 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I beleive we can all reltae somehow to this. Very nicely written.

  • Beautiful Scars On Saturday, April 24, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    I like the way you get your thoughts out..exellent write. -fairy-

  • A former member wrote: we all feel like this at times and you have put our feelings into words wonderfully ~ twisted

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