Would you ever love? (thanks for the title Suicidal_Love)

By nesbia

You'll hold each other tightly
hold hands for the long walk
You'll ignore the sounds of passing cars
As you kiss in the dark

But the little voice in your head
Keeeps growing louder
And you know your love won't last long
For soon u will hate

You will wonder why you loved
And feel you never can again
You will long for the warmth they gave
And your heart will ache within

if you knew before time began
That you would feel this way
would you smile and be ok?
Or would you ever love?
*~Rachel~*

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Copyright 2004 nesbia
Published on Thursday, July 8, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • K_Love On Friday, July 9, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    How about Would you ever love? for a title.. I liked this its nice. ~Kirsten~

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