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Battered and Torn
By nesbia
Lying battered and torn on the floor
There's a knot on my head
A knife embeded in my thigh
blood streaming from my mouth and nose
Lying here I hope to die
all I ever wanted from you
Was Love
and this is what I got
*~Rocket~*
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Copyright 2004 nesbia
Published on Wednesday, April 21, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
I feel like I can see you. Your imagery is amazing.
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A former member wrote:
i have felt your pain... this is way too real for me...excellent--jenn
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On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175)
wrote:
Exellent write..betrayal flows from it...be expecting it to go on my favorited as soon as I get upgrades... -fairy-
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On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Great write, I loved the images that you gave me through your words.. the last 2 lines are very powerful! Awesome write ~Kirsten~
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