Lost and abandoned

By nesbia

Lost and abandoned
In this sea of tears
Holding onto the pain
You caused

Felling it over
And over again
You never noticed
How lost I was

The pain consumed me
Until nothing was left
But the skeleton
Of a lost child
*~Rachel~*





Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2004 nesbia
Published on Tuesday, April 6, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "Lost and abandoned"

Log in to post comments.
  • A former member wrote: Great flow to it. 'In this sea of tears" very creative

  • murder_in_clubland On Thursday, April 8, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384)By person wrote:

    its nice....romantic almost....breath taking thats for sure~slave

  • Neith On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Neith (21)By person wrote:

    Amazing poem...very well crafted...I can relate in a twisted way. Great job!~shy vampire

Contribution Level

nesbia's Favorite Poets
nesbia's Favorite Works
Share/Save This Post
subscribenesbia's Latest Works Feed



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]

Attention: Darkpoetry is now in maintenance mode and will be shutting down soon. Save your work if you wish to keep it.