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Lost and abandoned
By nesbia
Lost and abandoned
In this sea of tears
Holding onto the pain
You caused
Felling it over
And over again
You never noticed
How lost I was
The pain consumed me
Until nothing was left
But the skeleton
Of a lost child
*~Rachel~*
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Copyright 2004 nesbia
Published on Tuesday, April 6, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Great flow to it. 'In this sea of tears" very creative
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On Thursday, April 8, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388)
wrote:
its nice....romantic almost....breath taking thats for sure~slave
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Neith
(21) wrote:
Amazing poem...very well crafted...I can relate in a twisted way. Great job!~shy vampire
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