The end

By nesbia

If forever were to be cut short
Tomorrow would seize today
And tears would freeze as
They dropped liquid silver
Into the fires of despair
Cries would mangle in our throats
As we declared undying love.
*~Rachel~*

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Published on Monday, April 5, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "The end"

On Monday, July 12, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (240) wrote:

This is very interesting. So much going on in so few words. So much to think about... Wonderful!
On Thursday, April 8, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384) wrote:

very pretty ~slave...
On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175) wrote:

I liked this, short and to the point, but still leaves you wanted more..nice write. -fairy-
On Monday, April 5, 2004, Lynaes (854) wrote:

I loved the line "Cries would mangle in our throats". Very nice work I loved it. ~L
On Monday, April 5, 2004, nesbia (15) wrote:

thank you so much Black roses for everyone
On Monday, April 5, 2004, K_Love (525) wrote:

Wow, this brought me images to my head, I loved this.. its great. ~Kirsten~
A former member wrote: 'If forever were to be cut short Tomorrow would seize today And tears would freeze ' - now that would be a way to describe the final day after
A former member wrote: pefect way that should read