Comments by All Members
- "Tight piece dude, we wrote something like this once call "Hang Him High.: But this is the better piece and we love that ending, tight"
Posted by I IS ME on "Monster" by Commander_Cadaver
- "Dude we stepped away for a bit, but you always make returning worth it. We seriously love your kind of dark, Tight work dude "
Posted by I IS ME on "Prison " by Commander_Cadaver
- "I'm not necessarily sure what you're doing with this. There's nothing wrong with liking the fray. I'm just afraid you might lose yourself. The light makes you feel dirty but, not everyone judged you by your stain. Keep writing my friend. I'm right there with you on the outskirts. Don't let darkness take you. I see too much light."
Posted by Phalanx on "Monster" by Commander_Cadaver
- "Haha I hope it does because this has been me for the last month for no reason that I can think of. Did not miss the insomnia one bit. Thank you for reading and commenting."
Posted by Commander_Cadaver on "Deprived" by Commander_Cadaver
- "Haha I've done that before. Better them than me. Thank you for the tips. I'll try them out and I'll let you know how it goes. Thank you for the help and reading."
Posted by Commander_Cadaver on "Deprived" by Commander_Cadaver
- "This catches very well the feelings of 'those nights' and what one might be thinking at the time. I'm glad you shared!"
Posted by Alectozere on "Deprived" by Commander_Cadaver
- "I accidentally punch other people in my sleep Instead of myself.
Try chamomile tea...
And also it helps me to try and think of a white void the words and image.
It helps me stop thinking. But anyway great write!!
"
Posted by Ashes2Ashes on "Deprived" by Commander_Cadaver
- "Freaking love the way you rolled this piece freaking backwards like that dude. We read this joint twice, freak this is clever as heck. Super tight piece dude"
Posted by I IS ME on "Trading Cards" by Commander_Cadaver
- "Honestly the cure and a peaceful existence isn't on a time scheduled. We do what we have to now to satiate the hunger. Tight"
Posted by I IS ME on "How Many?" by Commander_Cadaver
- "As always dude you are a great story teller of the darkness. We simply love this piece, tight work dude"
Posted by I IS ME on "Windows" by Commander_Cadaver
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