Comments by All Members
- "The description alone is enough to take my breath away, "after you've dehumanized something long enough it's apparently not a crime?" hit me hard. Very respective, not too gorey, or dark, just painful.
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Posted by BleedSilver on "Inside Ghetto Walls" by Invader Lyn
- "There is just not enough room to say what I need to say...The very idea you have captured in this piece goes way beyond the words typed on my flickering screen. I can feel it, I am there."
Posted by BleedSilver on "Inside Ghetto Walls" by Invader Lyn
- "very nice sara. i dont know why i dont check out your writing more often..."
I steal your flame's oxygen
and as it holds its breath" now that unblemished poetry to my eyes. nicely done.
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Posted by Twilight on "Diluted" by Invader Lyn
- ""the figure in the mirror smiles vibrantly /
I hope they pay close attention"... something about this couplet really appeals to me. evocative and well expressed piece, this... fine write. :) "
Posted by purr_verse on "Diluted" by Invader Lyn
- "excelent imagery--I am personally a fan of the sewn shut type of expression--nicely done"
Posted by Northstar on "Diluted" by Invader Lyn
- "A very well displayed persona metaphor factory prodution sheet piece. If i were into [collecting] poems or purchasing them - this would be one i would tuck into a box. Wonderful type [D&A]"
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Beating the Storm" by Invader Lyn
- "At first I thought the rhyme was forced but I was wrong. It’s more complex. The piece was well written and (I concur) disturbing. I enjoyed this a lot."
Posted by Lifeless on "Beating the Storm" by Invader Lyn
- "a promise from you is just you lying
I've asked but you don't answer me
I want something that will never be
I'm next to you but you don't even see
I locked my heart and you destroyed the key best parts i crawled inside those and died"
Posted by Unknown on "Still-born" by Invader Lyn
- "the first part kinda ruled.. cous this have been writen tons of times, but for once I loved it.. maybe listening to tool made a difrence.. who knows.."
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Beating the Storm" by Invader Lyn
- "Brutal, tied in lace, run through fields of flowers painted lightly by the blood of children. Least that's what this made me think of. -END-"
Posted by Unknown on "Beating the Storm" by Invader Lyn
- "The intensity of this was delicious, gorgeous, passionate descriptions. such an atmosphere you've created.. I agree with purr, those lines are absolutely wonderful. Awesome work. "
Posted by Lynaes on "Heat Exhaustion" by Invader Lyn
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