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"Unique style and wording. Enjoyable read. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "The Whatevership" by Mute Serenade

"I kind of want to "Nope" the hell out of this because this is too real. Fuck. Yeah, I think that sums it up. "
Posted by Drea on "The Whatevership" by Mute Serenade

"Oh man, this is too familiar. I love the wit and grit of this. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "The Whatevership" by Mute Serenade

"This was a fantastic read!!! Excellently penned!!! - BFP "
Posted by Bornfrompain on "The Whatevership" by Mute Serenade

"That last stanza hit this home. I'm glad to see you posting. Now I need to read more from you. "
Posted by Drea on "A Love Like Diabetes (2 versions)" by Mute Serenade

"This reminded me of someone I've tried to forget. There are so many good lines in this, and you can feel the emotions. I enjoyed this. "
Posted by Drea on "The Death You Promised Me" by Mute Serenade

"Wow. Great poem. Well thought out and honest. Betcha shed a few tears while writing it. Superb write, JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "The Death You Promised Me" by Mute Serenade

"Wow this was amazing!!! - BFP "
Posted by Bornfrompain on "A Love Like Diabetes (2 versions)" by Mute Serenade

"The imagery here was great. I especially loved the last stanza, had a haunting feel to it. Wrapped the piece up nicely, well written."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "The Death You Promised Me" by Mute Serenade

"Awe shucks, why thank you! :)"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "The Death You Promised Me" by Mute Serenade

"This was AWESOME! - BFP "
Posted by Bornfrompain on "The Death You Promised Me" by Mute Serenade

"You made me see Icicles in a whole new way. Thank you!"
Posted by Arwen on "Icicle" by Mute Serenade

"my mom would inject her insulin while eating a cinnamon roll... there was no telling that woman anything! an entertaining and insightful read... ~worm~ "
Posted by worm on "A Love Like Diabetes (2 versions)" by Mute Serenade

"This is so sad, because it is plastered with truth. Absolutely excellent writing. "
Posted by Magdalena on "Plaster Casts." by Mute Serenade

"An honest gem of a piece....And a capt_funguy fave..Says it all :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "In the works (i'll finish it one day)" by Mute Serenade

"The sixth stanza made my heart skip."
Posted by Unknown on "Pillow Smoke II (I forget)" by Mute Serenade

"This was absolutely stunning. A shifting scene from night to day, introspective and sincere. I am glad I stumbled onto it!"
Posted by Miztaken4beauty on "I stole this poem from a Drunk Girl" by Mute Serenade

"So lucky I fell upon this. It takes you through quite a jouney.. struck speechless, great write."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "I stole this poem from a Drunk Girl" by Mute Serenade

"interesting .. surreal .. BRILLIANT! what a write! bravo! this was totally magnificent."
Posted by Unknown on "I stole this poem from a Drunk Girl" by Mute Serenade

"very nice word play!"
Posted by Antigeist on "Pillow Smoke." by Mute Serenade

"You make me tuck away "Under holy blankets Question my mortality And envy Every curve to your back"..egads....tempting beauty. the incompleteness you speak of is only slightly tinging the write; hinting at what is to come....it makes it more complete in theory...so.. ..glad i read this todae. "
Posted by Unknown on "In the works (i'll finish it one day)" by Mute Serenade

""I wait for the warm hush of things being okay"--love this line. "
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "I do believe..." by Mute Serenade

""And the only sight I can adopt Is the fall of my shortcomings" ..this was wonderfully expressed. "
Posted by Unknown on "Pillow Smoke II (I forget)" by Mute Serenade

"this was marvelous"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "I stole this poem from a Drunk Girl" by Mute Serenade

"very well presented. The last lines were really fantastic and closed the poem perfectly. "
Posted by Dei on "Ephedrine" by Mute Serenade

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