Comments by All Members
- "Eliminate the problem, and you aren't the problem... the razors, the pills, and the booze are, kick them out, eventually, you'll be okay"
Posted by Ideas on "Overdose" by xXxEmotionlessxXx
- "So enduring, deep, personal and heavy with emotion. This is a truly amazing piece. I particularly like "Embracing arms, Holding me down in this cold reality Devious arms, Reaching out to caress this moment". So true. Awesome job! ~L "
Posted by Lynaes on "Golden Treasure" by xXxEmotionlessxXx
- "o0o awsome write you have here.. "Wines of red flood my eyes
Because my only wish was to watch you die " i like those 2 lines, the rest were great as well.. nice job overall i love it"
Posted by yslehc on "Golden Treasure" by xXxEmotionlessxXx
- "Like a shield and a reason to keep on, familiar. I like your writing style and the way you put together rhymes."
Posted by Storm on "Mine" by xXxEmotionlessxXx
- "This is how it feels, you want to die from the moment you wake up til the moment you go to sleep.. fantasies of blood and death. Yup yup.. you've captured pain. Good write again."
Posted by Storm on "Sweet Fantasy" by xXxEmotionlessxXx
- "Good rhymes, story, meaning and a forcefull end. At the meaning "I try to fake the happiness I feel and tell you that these smiles are real" I knew I was sold.. Very cool stuff.
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Posted by Storm on "Empty Promises" by xXxEmotionlessxXx
- "Recogzise this. I like the way you write as if the blade isn't controled by you, that is how it feels sometimes.. Good write."
Posted by Storm on "Overdose" by xXxEmotionlessxXx
- "relatable last line. truly...i felt it. thoroughly and roughly. to mourn the forgotten and lost.to relive what feels impossible. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "You..." by xXxEmotionlessxXx
- "like some1 once said to me _you gotta indulge into the great things of life and not the bad ones...go for something simple if you cant find something great"
Posted by Unknown on "Overdose" by xXxEmotionlessxXx
