Comments by All Members
- "...if this is about the last moments of someone's life, where's the surge of emotions; the "flashing of an entire life in a split-second"? It's not bad, but I reckon it should've been more intense."
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "Darkness Falls" by Drayvinio
- "That movie was weak but I enjoyed this poem. Your writing structure is quite interesting. The last stanza is intense. " A dream ends it matters not as the last breath is taken darkness falls " WOW congrats "
Posted by Unknown on "Darkness Falls" by Drayvinio
- "*keep your head above water*do not give in to 'the going under'...i love this."
Posted by AniDayz on "Decisions" by Drayvinio
- "ahhh...such a painful read,one i relate to in such a way...i am speechless, but will completly 'ditto'(in respect) solace + suicideseason...theyve said it better than i could."
Posted by AniDayz on "It be" by Drayvinio
- "oooohhh...so many vivid descriptions. and a wonderful choice of words. i love this!"
Posted by AniDayz on "Love you" by Drayvinio
- "this is exrememly captivating...enchanting and haunting.again,your imagery is intense. wonderful write."
Posted by AniDayz on "Sunshine Fades" by Drayvinio
- "this paints a beautiful serene picture in my mind...'just me and the wind on this starry night the wind will keep my secret my precious words to you'...i love that*"
Posted by AniDayz on "Starry Night" by Drayvinio
- "superb.i like the style of this,and the meaning of it. nice write...i must read more work of yours"
Posted by AniDayz on "denied" by Drayvinio
- ""Love you covered in salt and sand"... that line was just soaked in emotion, excellent work. This is how I wish someone looked at me , your talent is obvious :), and thanks for faving me and my poem :*
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Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Love you" by Drayvinio
- "Dont give the bastards the satisfation of ruining your heart!"
Posted by Solace on "It be" by Drayvinio
- "Firstly Poe is an awesome writer dont forget his short stories...I recommend Percy Bysshe Shelley as well :) Secondly this poem was awesome, youth and love shouldnt mix really in my opinion too much tragedy, second chances are not in my nature... Dont giv"
Posted by Solace on "It be" by Drayvinio
- "..this is what is called "impact writing"...pure and effective.very provoking.-season"
Posted by suicideseason on "Never" by Drayvinio
- ".i agree...fuck forgiving and forgetting.people think they can put you through an eternity of hell and then erase everything by saying the magical phrase,"i'm sorry" and then pretend nothing happened.i fucking hate people.awesome write.i feel you.~season "
Posted by suicideseason on "It be" by Drayvinio
- "Yeah, and I thought that movie was lame. Still, not bad. disregarding the title this was a well written peice. Good work."
Posted by Alanarchy on "Darkness Falls" by Drayvinio
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