denied

By Drayvinio

stop. rewind.
can't find. denied.
ready to disappear.
open up your eyes.
wake up. it's your last shot.
can't bring me down.
hear what what i'm trying to say?
leave it all behind.
its been far too long.

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2005 Drayvinio
Published on Thursday, January 27, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "denied"

Log in to post comments.
  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Friday, September 9, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    nice pace to it... the voice was almost like one of those boot camp military dudes "ON YOUR FEET SOLDIER IT'S TIME TO KICK SOME ASS!" almost, but not quite :)

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Friday, September 9, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    the message to me here is that we all need to get off our butts and achieve a little

  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, February 2, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    i like how this is written...it all just plays itself nicely..~AoD

  • AniDayz On Friday, January 28, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    superb.i like the style of this,and the meaning of it. nice write...i must read more work of yours

Contribution Level

Drayvinio's Favorite Poets
Drayvinio's Favorite Works
Share/Save This Post



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]