denied
By Drayvinio
stop. rewind.
can't find. denied.
ready to disappear.
open up your eyes.
wake up. it's your last shot.
can't bring me down.
hear what what i'm trying to say?
leave it all behind.
its been far too long.
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Copyright 2005 Drayvinio
Published on Thursday, January 27, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, September 9, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
nice pace to it... the voice was almost like one of those boot camp military dudes "ON YOUR FEET SOLDIER IT'S TIME TO KICK SOME ASS!" almost, but not quite :)
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On Friday, September 9, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
the message to me here is that we all need to get off our butts and achieve a little
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On Wednesday, February 2, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
i like how this is written...it all just plays itself nicely..~AoD
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On Friday, January 28, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
superb.i like the style of this,and the meaning of it. nice write...i must read more work of yours