Comments by All Members
- "I wouldn't think its because your too weak to leave.
from my own experiences it was more because I would miss the good I had seen in my ex"
Posted by Unknown on "Stay (black and blue)" by Elizabeth
- "great poem... just great.. you have such a creative mind im jealous.. im guessing the suicides first go to heaven to go get phsyciatric help and then get sent to hell for breaking a commandment.. lol"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Painless Suicide" by Elizabeth
- "i cant believe this doesnt have more comments...i can almost hear those faint whispers on the wind through the rustling leaves ..."
Posted by Sin on "Garden Nocturne" by Elizabeth
- "damn you write really well but...(and plz try to understand I say this with love and respect) you think like shit man. "
Posted by Unknown on "Now I'm Numb" by Elizabeth
- "but i do love the wording and imagery and the depth of emotion.....careful not to cut too far in... you catch that artery and it will be the only artery that will bleed forever just to keep you alive"
Posted by Unknown on "Death Of A Heart" by Elizabeth
- "I would hate to leav a comment that led you to believe that the concept of this poem is something to cling to forever...its ok to learn from. But i hope what you learn most is that you're worth more than this"
Posted by Unknown on "Death Of A Heart" by Elizabeth
- "*sigh* i like this but i hesitate to leave a comment because while i like your poetry and your writing and find you to be mature beyond your age... "
Posted by Unknown on "Death Of A Heart" by Elizabeth
- "Beautifully dark, but without trespassing into the region of melodrama; certainly a rarity, here. One small correction - it's "silhouette." Other than that... beautifully done!"
Posted by stormtalk on "Garden Nocturne" by Elizabeth
- "I understand the predicament of an abusive relationship, you have crafted the feelings of it well in this writing, it's very real and raw, Maddy x"
Posted by Unknown on "Stay (black and blue)" by Elizabeth
- "this was an amazing write. i wish i could force people who have done the same to me to read it. thank you for this."
Posted by void on "Now I'm Numb" by Elizabeth
- "this was lovely, your words were so picturesque, i could see this garden, just beautiful ~kristy
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Posted by Sin on "Garden Nocturne" by Elizabeth
- "i cant exsist in this place with a plastic face....fucking awsome line...this is a very illuminating peice thats speaks volumes!"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Now I'm Numb" by Elizabeth
- "wow, one of the few poems ever written that sounds good when flowing. Great Write, I hope to read more of your works in the future. parts of this work were awesome.. the other parts... fortunately for you... were even more so ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "Corrosive Mother" by Elizabeth
- "I LIKE THIS...BUT I SENSE THAT ITS MISSING SOMETHING LIKE THERE WAS SOMETHING ELSE YOU WANTED TO SAY BUT HELD IT BACK...."
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "Addicted" by Elizabeth
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