Garden Nocturne

By Elizabeth

Green gardens grow black once daylight fades,
Rosebuds of blood, the yellows turn gray.
Seeds of malice nestled deep in the night,
Sillohets hinted at, tinted moonlight.
In silence I stroll, my woes to bare,
A back breaking burden that none can share.
If only some soul could see my spirits lifted,
But alas, I fear they're none so gifted.
This Garden Nocturne I've grown on my own,
preverse as it is, of my own device.
These are the seeds that I've sown,
for companions my thoughts must suffice.
The sun never shines, it's always night here,
Bounty of blooms nurtured by lunar light,
Time passes by, unaware of years,
forever suspended in neverending night.
Obscure figures cast twisting shadows,
Knotty limbs knocking like terrified knees,
To much for my liking I'm reminded of gallows,
as I catch distant whispers riding the breeze.
Soon the leaves dry, wither and die,
As fall becomes winter in the Garden Nocturne.
Seasons pass by without you and I,
Reasons I fear I'll never learn.

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Copyright 2004 Elizabeth
Published on Tuesday, November 2, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • anakronistik_me On Thursday, September 13, 2007, anakronistik_me (24)By person wrote:

    incredibly beautiful. deserves much more attention. and i agree with spiritus. i wish i could have written this.

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful job. :3

  • stormtalk On Sunday, January 9, 2005, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    Beautifully dark, but without trespassing into the region of melodrama; certainly a rarity, here. One small correction - it's "silhouette." Other than that... beautifully done!

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (340)By person wrote:

    truly melodic and romantic...i wish i could have written this...-l-

  • Sin On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this was lovely, your words were so picturesque, i could see this garden, just beautiful ~kristy

  • Sin On Sunday, April 2, 2006, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    i cant believe this doesnt have more comments...i can almost hear those faint whispers on the wind through the rustling leaves ...

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