Comments by All Members
- "It really sucks when the people around you don't see that you're falling apart and you think why did I have to go completely insane before you noticed I was drowning. Great write, JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "Is it real?" by DeathSentance
- "perfect chiasma concluding this... the repetition was a lil much but.. the reversal at the end brought something more than a pretty image, to me.... thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Little Girl" by DeathSentance
- "no comments since 04 on this one/// but i hope you never drowned yourself... you can put it on paper instead of on your skin. and you shouldn't feel like people should know you are depressed/ maybe they are happy
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Posted by Step_20 on "Is it real?" by DeathSentance
- "Wow...Your writing is like a good book...and I dont find many of those, well, i suppose if i read alittle more....ahhh what i am trying to say is I LOVE YOUR WORK thank you. ~GoNe~"
Posted by Cwn Annwn on "The truth" by DeathSentance
- "usually , i don't get too excited by the " when i'm dead stuff " but your bluntness transcends the genre ... this is great - funguy "
Posted by capt_funguy on "The truth" by DeathSentance
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