Comments by All Members
- "I know how you feel, but I believe you will regret those walls later on. Perhaps you should start with a nice hedge and see how you like it first. It was a beautiful poem and I greatly enjoyed it.
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Posted by Saschwann on "New Set Of Walls" by Ideas
- "THis is well done. I like the use of similey and the imagery."
Posted by Thorn on "Broken Home" by Ideas
- "Say, this is an uncanny description of my house every night. I, too have written about my family issues."
Posted by Thorn on "Broken Home" by Ideas
- ""words like razors pierce the armor"- that line especially stuck out."
Posted by Unknown on "Broken Home" by Ideas
- "so aful for a person to have to go through all that hurt and pain, such a cruel world, very emotional this piece was, good job ~Emptyness~"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "If You're There" by Ideas
- "great piece... yet I pray that you are complete even before you find someone else... you have to stick around with yourself even when you fall... then you will find what and then whom you are seeking... 1LOVE, Seth"
Posted by Mr King on "On My Knees" by Ideas
- "very, very very well said, flowed well, and the subject matter was touching :) well done."
Posted by Unknown on "On My Knees" by Ideas
- "Nah...This is more of a love poem, not religious. This deserves a lot more than a comment from me. This poem rocked. And I won't tell you I have been there, done that...just to keep writing."
Posted by BleedSilver on "On My Knees" by Ideas
- "this is such a beautiful statement of desperation. and i have asked for the same things. "I'm tired of being sensitive in an insensitive world" was my favorite line... good write. "
Posted by Unknown on "If You're There" by Ideas
- "This has got such a pace, quite frantic at the start, but from "Confusion settles" downwards it slows and closes quite softly. Love it."
Posted by Lotophagi on "Identity Crisis" by Ideas
- "I just read all of your work...words fail...you are one extremely talented mofo, and i hope you find a way to put these peices to good use, they are simply too exquisite to be locked away."
Posted by Unknown on "Something Of The Sort" by Ideas
- "the closing line was so freakin perfect ... so calm .... there is no suspension of disbelief with your works ... they ring so real ... as this one does .... beautiful ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Gone" by Ideas
- "The title is misleading. I expected this to be a cliche piece of shit, but it turned out to be quite commendable. =)"
Posted by Unknown on "Gone" by Ideas
- "the last line killed me...this is too sad to describe..."
Posted by girlafraid on "Gone" by Ideas
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