Comments by All Members
- "Ill dig you out and then we can play,when you were yourself. Just like the old days."
Posted by Unknown on "Rotting" by Ideas
- "I feel your pain. I feel like everyone here understands. I would like to say that it is people like you who put your work out there are the people who inspire me to do things inlife. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "If You're There" by Ideas
- "this one sort of got to me... i actually look at my meat suit all the time and wonder how it grew and i still feel so much like a child..."
Posted by Unknown on "Missing Him" by Ideas
- "Wow..I was anticipating where this one was going..and it ended with a crushing blow. Loved those last lines."
Posted by Twilight on "Beautiful You" by Ideas
- "Last two stanzas really hit the mark (:. Maybe change the beginning though, so you don't use darkness twice? Either way, wonderful poem (:"
Posted by Doll Eyes on "Looking Up" by Ideas
- "what a way to end an already wonderful write. those last two lines .. WOW! mind blowing. this write is haunting and an act of pure ingenuity! "
Posted by Unknown on "Looking Up" by Ideas
- "I love this! I kinda felt that the poem was going to change toward the end, some sort of "But never like YOU" ending, but I was not disappointed, just incorrect with the heading of the poem. Beautiful!"
Posted by Unknown on "We Are..." by Ideas
- "Heart wrenching, emotional write... The pattern was nicely used, i enjoyed this"
Posted by Unknown on "Beautiful You" by Ideas
- "Wow, beautiful. I was with you every step of the way, and I've never experienced anything like this. great job."
Posted by Unknown on "Gone" by Ideas
- "This sounded like it was meant for me. Thank you so much. I always love it when I come across writings that put into words what I can't, or don't know how to, say."
Posted by Unknown on "On My Knees" by Ideas
- "good emotion, a nice read... Judas lips and serpent's tongue... yep, sounds like a bad relationship... dump her...lol... thanks for sharing"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Spotlight" by Ideas
- "some time u can't take it no more ... interesting write ... thx for sharin "
Posted by Unknown on "Spotlight" by Ideas
- "Hm, I like the change of pace, unexpected and subtle, keeping your readers on their toes, I like it! Thanks for the write."
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "Identity Crisis" by Ideas
- "Your feelings really shined through here....... The sentiment expressed is one I can understand easily."
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Stain" by Ideas
- "i liked the ending...so what do you do when you cant hide under the covers? ...wear your pain under a mask of emotionlessness."
Posted by RubyXero on "Missing Him" by Ideas
- "Works as such are always great because the raw honesty comes out! 'Such grudges weigh heavy on the heart' describes this as universal as it is! Great Write!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Broken Home" by Ideas
- "I can completly feel this.. it makes that pang of i don't know what in the middle of your chest come back when all you ever work at is making it go away"
Posted by Reefer_rave on "We Are..." by Ideas
- "this was lovely...so self-sacrificing..but that last line all but begged for understanding and acceptance..this pulled at heartstrings ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "On My Knees" by Ideas
- "i love this, in fact it's something i should probably do with my best friend and et her catch herself, but i can't because i don't want to lose her..... AWESOME WRITE"
Posted by beautifulfallenangel on "Beautiful You" by Ideas
- ""But I don’t know how to not care
I’m not programmed that way
Is that why you’re not there?
---you really captured what is so easily not noticed...Can't really know it 'til you've been there...not caring though, for me, usually comes later,...with hate"
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Untitled" by Ideas
- "Wow...it hurts when two people put each on pedestals and knock each other off. Thud...really, never did that...
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Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Untitled" by Ideas
- ""I'm dying where it counts most/And I'm taking you with me" Shit...this blew chunks through my chest and left my heart vulnerably in the open for the world to rip apart. Wonderful rhyme scheme. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "Looking Up" by Ideas
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