Comments by All Members
- "Very intelligent basis, obviously a subject you feel passionately about. It just feels a little jumbled. The ending isn't as powerful as I think it could be."
Posted by Liz on "red china rain" by manunkind
- "Wow, that was amazing. Really amazing. I can't think of any other word to describe it. Excellent write."
Posted by Silent Assassin on "claire" by manunkind
- "this was beautiful, the images danced behind my eyes as they unfolded, beautiful ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "cruel heat" by manunkind
- "just checking it again and again, how come i didnt read a poem for u before? damn i am stupid...
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Posted by Unknown on "catharsis" by manunkind
- "*we’ll meet again when the moon and the mountains melt as one* i feel that i am not reading words but i am seeing a wonderful images, ur work is just WOOOOOOOOOOW and nothing but breath taking..one of the most touching words i ever read....thank u ..Ima"
Posted by Unknown on "catharsis" by manunkind
- "this is exquisitely told,many parts made me smile,it was a joy to read it flowed and swhirled like rising smoke "
Posted by Anth on "catharsis" by manunkind
- "-strumming the coldest of hearts, yet there is something eerie about this piece, still possessing a magical air yet almost rose-wiltering. A tremendously beautiful write that encourages me to add you to my favourites . . exquisite ~ Rose "
Posted by Unknown on "catharsis" by manunkind
- ""I’ll paint a picture from dreams And you’ll see… You’ll see a chase scene
From a Hollywood production" this is plaguing; impressive. The laughing blooming daffodils. .themountain and moon melting as one. .your work is a soft hue of halo-light s"
Posted by Unknown on "catharsis" by manunkind
- "-unflinching images you have so magnificently contrived. I feel saddened I have not come across this work before . . so much can be drawn from it . . i am bedazzled ~ Rose"
Posted by Unknown on "the nun's birthday" by manunkind
- "Oh wow-I am utterly besotted with this piece (and confused at the conclusion I have not discovered you before) . . this is stunning. The first stanza beautifully invited me in . . took me on a voyage through the delicacy of your subject and the unflinchin"
Posted by Unknown on "the nun's birthday" by manunkind
- "This exquisite painful beauty is rare. It encourages me to read your creation again and again. Very pure and flawless. ~*~ Rose ~*~"
Posted by Unknown on "dont touch me" by manunkind
- "Rise! that gave me a wonderful sense of belonging with these unhappy darkened few! beautiful and tragic as all things seem to be!!"
Posted by Unknown on "the conquerers" by manunkind
- "i love this! and thanks for your comments by the way! theres just so many mirrors waiting to be broken, to be felt... beautiful"
Posted by Unknown on "break the mirror" by manunkind
- "I love this with a passion..."My silk stockings are stained with blood"...what a spectacular mental image. *hugs* The end is a riot, as well."
Posted by Unknown on "drunken prayers" by manunkind
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