Comments by All Members
- "Personally, I thought the repetition was awesome. Maybe this wasn't the point, but it made me think of a child saying it, which kind of went along with the whole innocent-pink deal. That's how it sounded to me anyway. Great job!"
Posted by GraySky on "pink nail polish" by manunkind
- "Wonderfully said, very beautiful write, kept me reading, lovely work, well done."
Posted by K_Love on "as a poet" by manunkind
- "omg... omg ... omg... this was so tintense. impressive. well written. great piece."
Posted by Dei on "WHEN IM ANGRY" by manunkind
- "thanks for the honest criticism! nobody gives it anymore! i agree about the ending, but in my poetry i try to be honest, and i felt that ending...so i kept it. what can i say? sometimes it works and sometimes it doesnt. :)"
Posted by manunkind on "red china rain" by manunkind
- "ahh, seems very interesting and incredibly wise. I'm not sure what exactly I get out of this, but something about it reminds me of Sylvia Plath, and that is really a good thing. . "
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "red china rain" by manunkind
- "Incredible and clever write. Well thought out and described, I have to agree with Liz, I wasn't really feeling the ending, nonetheless, this was an awesome write."
Posted by K_Love on "red china rain" by manunkind
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