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- "world weary and a sense of acceptance in defeat. I feel I understand this one intimately. the moon understands, commiserates in its thoughtful glow... beautiful and solitary, somewhat sullen. i hope you aren't feeling this way now. much love and respect, dr. Strangelove. xo"
Posted by Unknown on "Tired" by metaphormachine
- "Dear, I have already written quite often that you are often really right with your guesses & imaginations ...
Also, I like your very own interpretations, so I would like rarely reply something ...
Must one always describe the sense of his poems & explain them? Much nicer it is when it makes to the reader several doors available ... through which one door the reader goes, is up to him ...
Thank you, sweetheart! for your concern & comment! :)"
Posted by metaphormachine on "Tired" by metaphormachine
- "'where the moons are enthroned' could be a chair and 'machinable' suggests one easily manipulated ...a drone of sorts ... when there's time there's no energy ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Tired" by metaphormachine
- "Read my sweet man as a short way of expressing that, although we have all these bloody machines to do lots of our work for us , every one still complains of perpetual tiredness. Too busy during the day to enjoy and when the sun goes down, to tired to enjoy the moon . That's the feel I get from your minimal words. You never say if I am barking up the wrong tree or not so I shall just continue to enjoy them in my own way. X x "
Posted by Stephanie Sideways on "Tired" by metaphormachine
- "Hello, you. harmonious dischord. i love that the more carnal eye is obviously female. i like this. i just prefer its fraternal twin. post more poetry for me to adore? xo"
Posted by Unknown on "Lethargy" by metaphormachine
- "Thanks! How ever a cryptical kinki(ness) response ... :) That I could get used absolutely.This here is only the negative. The original is to find under "Lethargy" ... if you haven't seen it before ..."
Posted by metaphormachine on "Segnitia" by metaphormachine
- "it's like a circuit diagram , interrupted by temptations and blurred into inaction ... a meltdown of clarity , the eyes aren't seeing... a rather unique offering , slightly disturbing..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Segnitia" by metaphormachine
- "this is really cool. abstract though observant. i love the effect of the two different eyes and the polished apple red promise/deception of the mouth. "
Posted by Unknown on "Segnitia" by metaphormachine
- ""come not visit me". as if this person was pushed out once before by a messy head/home. i love the attitude in this. anyone worth a visit won't mind the chaos once in a while... they'll pick their way through it to you... accept you as you are... perhaps lend a helping hand if it's wanted."
Posted by Unknown on "Home" by metaphormachine
- "very vague... when is this someday to come? reminds me of all those helpless and insufficient tweets from onlookers of personal struggle. "it will be okay. it'll work out. it'll get better." rather than embracing and saying, "i'll still be here if it's not." thanks for the brain food, dear."
Posted by Unknown on "Vague" by metaphormachine
- "color and water are rebirth, stimulation, finding oneself in climax... while coke only goes flat and never satisfies.. stains and corrodes. interesting choice of metaphor. i love it."
Posted by Unknown on "Midnight Blue" by metaphormachine
- "Insider phrase ... !? What do you mean? Sorry, sweetie ... I don't understand ... & also the urban dictionary speaks in riddles ... strange word ... But still thanks for the comment & maybe any praise ... :)"
Posted by metaphormachine on "Sophistications Mirror" by metaphormachine
- "Oh no, my dear! I wish for you very much strength for a successful recovery as a cure ... wounds & scars are life, but also very painful ... but remember & everlasting imagine ... only the tough lasses & fellas will come into the garden ... ;)"
Posted by metaphormachine on "Sophistications Mirror" by metaphormachine
- "Do you mean that I should fall in love again & again in one person, so that the necklace would be ready then ... at some point?! Very romantic ... :)"
Posted by metaphormachine on "Pearl" by metaphormachine
- "Thanks, honey! Here is finally a wordplay which works in English like in German ... but okay, the title is actually An English sentence or phrase ... I like the word "stanza" pretty much ... Thanks for that word ... :)"
Posted by metaphormachine on "Baby, Blue Sky" by metaphormachine
- "That depends on what is the kinki in your frog ... whether for "kinking" or "kinkiness"? ;) You have a house?!? The poem is quite old, created in a fuddled & stoned time ... as the name of the book or volume of poems "... Rush" implies. Better would have been even toxication, but it's about several variations of any rush. Nowadays, it's neat in my home & you can come visit me anytime ... & I hate phones! ;)
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Posted by metaphormachine on "Home" by metaphormachine
- "ah ha ha ...my house looks like a bit like Hagrid's cabin crossed with a studio , workshop , science lab , kitchen, gallery and mad eclectic crafter's stash ... what that says about my head is anyone's guess ... it's always wise to phone before you come over..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Home" by metaphormachine
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