Comments by All Members
- "Suicidal bleeding, I've always loved blood, the smell of it the look of it and the taste... Completely off topic mind, but thank you for the read."
Posted by Strataic on "I Bleed" by deathndismay
- "I'm glad your hooked!!! I wont post the best of my works until I know that the people of this site can accept me..."
Posted by deathndismay on "I Bleed" by deathndismay
- "Your words flow smoothly and portray a bloody scene of the unfortunate suicidal fate. Wonderfully worded. Keep me hooked on till the very end... another wonderful piece. I can see you improving rapidly. :)"
Posted by Symbol on "I Bleed" by deathndismay
- "What a torturous sounding piece, pain sprinkled to top it all off. Well done here, seriously. Spectacular! 10/10 rated "
Posted by Symbol on "Fallen dreams" by deathndismay
- "Title is very fitting for such a masterpiece :) Your words have a deathly chill to them that I love... the placement of words, the flow and the overall atmosphere it gives off is just... outstanding. Thanks for sharing :)"
Posted by Symbol on "Kiss of Death" by deathndismay
- "so beautifully written. words so perfectly chosen, it sweeps you right into the work making reading it effortless and the story becomes something that naturally carries your mind into what is oh so familiar but not always spoken. I hope that made sense;)"
Posted by Unknown on "I Bleed" by deathndismay
- "awesome pen, morbid and sad lovely combination. Depression seems to be popular on DP. I write quite a few myself. "
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "I Bleed" by deathndismay
- "Very poignant and well postulated. The eye bleeding sounds like hemhorrhagic fever maybe, but then you'd be in no mood to write. Seriously, this was darkly despairing - cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Hourglass" by deathndismay
- "Time is short live life to the fullest and all that crap. i like your take and the hourglass analogy Good flow and rhyme as well. "
Posted by Markus Darkscribe on "Hourglass" by deathndismay
- "when its your time...its your time! cool little poem about how life is basically borrowed time. i just wish i could see my sands of time. i'd max my frikkin credit cards with time to enjoy my spendings. awesome mr. death!"
Posted by haunted on "Hourglass" by deathndismay
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