Comments by All Members
- "This really reminded me of a poem I once read by Carol Anne Duffy called 'Lovesick'.. though, I feel like this has a slightly different.. edge to it. Anyway, I loved this.. truly wonderful"
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "crush" by purr_verse
- "Oh love, your such a soppy romantic natalie, so beautiful...Is a letter opener a good gift to a love? Your judgement call not mine :)"
Posted by Solace on "crush" by purr_verse
- "hehe excellent, so innocent appearing at first then the ending just gives a sly satisfying little chill....thanks for that ;)"
Posted by NikesRain on "crush" by purr_verse
- "Regret is such a secret human emotion. we feel it more than we see it in others as it is a weakness. A weakness of failure. However you expressed it in such an honest an beautiful way. This was great!"
Posted by Unknown on "Love's Vespine Allegory" by purr_verse
- "awwwwww - wow it's so nice to hear something of such different nature - Yet man! This relates to so much in the real world - I don't even have to spell out what. So beautiful - Soooooo much images pouring out. I had to slow down while i was reading it"
Posted by Unknown on "Love's Vespine Allegory" by purr_verse
- "'Inspiration comes cheap on Saturdays" i loved that line....you've purrfectly captured how it feels some days to write..i just can't stop grinning to myself as i reread this at least 4 times, great work as always"
Posted by NikesRain on "The next one's a winner" by purr_verse
- "shining imagery and a lovely whimsical feel in this, and the ending just provokes your mind to skip from reverie into more serious contemplation. ahh that fear can over ride such a light moment..wonderful"
Posted by NikesRain on "Love's Vespine Allegory" by purr_verse
- "Lord, how did I miss this? A masterpiece. Simplicity with such profound undercurrents. Utterly marvelous."
Posted by Unknown on "Bent" by purr_verse
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On the other hand , This can be taken to a literal end. A shock from the past ebbing back into our future..Wasting away the barren flesh that wears so thin upon us all. Like baby fat or the rinsed stuffing of an old chair."
Posted by jaunty pill on "Ignis Fatuus" by purr_verse
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The first stanza literally knocked my socks off. And not only that , But you did it with a talented pen. Your wording is original and , Somehow , Mellow and still alive. It invokes a clever appeal...A tragic frame caught in beauty. An eruption."
Posted by jaunty pill on "Ignis Fatuus" by purr_verse
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An ending that rocks the reader into an almost twisted silence. This poems contains some of the most creative words I've ever seen used in a piece. This is reflective and hauntingly. Welcome to my bookmarks. I can't wait to read more."
Posted by jaunty pill on "Love's Vespine Allegory" by purr_verse
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