Comments by All Members
- "~undescribable...i just want to keep this poem for myself...haha how selfish of me...but really this is just one cool write...unlike all your other works this seems to be simple yet still packing that poetic punch...very cool"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "becoming poetry" by purr_verse
- "My favourite gNatty, your metaphors are second-to-none, your writings ALWAYS refreshingly original. Your voice is not only unique it never disappoints. Ever. Everything you write is a little universe of magnificence. "
Posted by flying_fox on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- ""Fictitious/The irony delicious" Sad, charming & whimsical, w/ the weight of cummings & the rhyming melody of Poe. There's even a bit of Hughes in there... but it's all you. be not sorry, the poetry is always there... Well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- "I think my absolute favorite part is when you tell the reader that you are "quite possibly fictitious." Painstaking honesty and reality. Really strikes a chord. Again wonderful..."
Posted by Unknown on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- "i'm so excited that you finally posted again!! this was whimsically beautiful and lilting..i loved this. "For the most part,
I'm a ghost art" very charming write. now, post more! :D"
Posted by Unknown on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- "i don't think i could ever tire of your work, it is too much like a guilty pleasure. as ever your words spin intelligent and wit, yet for some reason this at its end seemed to cause a catch in my throat and a little twinge of sadness.... but maybe i'm see"
Posted by NikesRain on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- "OH MY YES! This is the reason you are one of my faves dear lady! Your wit is so charming, and your words just so damned good! Awesomeness Natalie! Julia~"
Posted by TaintedButterfly on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- "a pandemic fear.life.metaphor; and you impeccably found a fleshy.fingerpulse resonating deep within us all. what if we fail? what if they hate? then we learn; and with grace.....ness"
Posted by Unknown on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- "I find much of the womens writes the most potent at times! It only takes one witness to really feel emabarresed or ashamed! But exhibitionism--woo-hoo! Luck to you!"
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- "The tone is the driving force in this piece. That sense of underlying vulnerability in a written voice is always incredibly appealing. An innocent curiosity with a fresh perspective. Very well crafted!"
Posted by Unknown on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- "Witty! This metaphor is so very subtle and tastefully conveyed that it almost eludes the eye at first. Then the entirety of it comes crashing down in a moment of whimsical hilarity. "
Posted by Unknown on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- "I love this, like everyone else. So simple, and straightforward and personal, nothing shocking, nothing overblown - just measured, dignified and beautiful. Thank you, I needed this today."
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "becoming poetry" by purr_verse
- "great portrayel of the process, it's often hard to make the work live up to the idea or mean as much as "that little verse at the heart of it all""
Posted by BoldSolitude on "becoming poetry" by purr_verse
- "*smiles* I'm afraid in my absence i've not really gotten any better at this whole commeting thing. But I think this is wonderful and i've really missed reading your work. Thank you.. this is excellent.. *applauds*"
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "Psycho, Analyst" by purr_verse
- "a pyschotic anaylsis....watch you don't terorise the coach...head thumping poetry, original context...Freud sweats in his Oedipus complex..and all I can think is: 'Jocasta was a whore...damn!!!'"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Psycho, Analyst" by purr_verse
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